I was amazed to find that this is the author's first post.
The story is well written and by what seems to be a very accomplished writer.
I thought the characters were well developed and the storyline was smooth flowing and believable.
Thanks for the read.
Would love to see more summer fun from these two.
If this be sin, I'm all for it!!
A great story.
A five star start!
I hope we will see many more--soon.
If there were 10 stars, you would have gotten all of them. Hope to read more of your stories, fact or fiction...
Love the setting and story, hope there is more!!!! Maybe some intense passionate romance beginning?
reading this was so very hot and incredible..
the taboo of it all gave it that very sinful edge of horniness ,
im now wanting even more of this fantastic awesome story . i really hope you are going to keep them cumming love it with a whole lot more than a 5 . pity you cant have a higher score .
Nice job. I liked Owen's aggressiveness. Also the mom's openness about her own desires. Could be another chapter where they figure out where to go from here.
Excellent beginning. Bring on more if you will. I thought the character development was very good.
Thanks for a good read.
Outstanding beginning! Keep it up.
Things like this usually take us by surprise - you captured it well !
This is really a good story, needed a bit more foreplay, but a good story, WRIGHT MORE ON THIS STORY
Just another self centered cheating slut . My husband is boring. My husband is fat . My husband don't have sex enough with me . Oh but my husband does provide a meal ticket for me . Hey i know .How about i cheat on him and fuck up our whole life together . Oh but wait one minute .I have my stud for a son to take care of all my dirty needs . Really .Just another cheating wife story with incest added .
How is a story of a wife and son that is cuckolding his father hot or wonderful .I just don't get it .Wait i forgot . The husband /father is boring , fat and don't fuck enough and has a little cock . The son has no respect for the man that raised , fed and clothed him almost all his life . Not counting sending him to collage . But remember the son does have a cock and mom loves big cocks . So this is how they pay him back .Wow . Nothing hot or wonderful here . Just two fuck ups with no feelings for the husband and father . Other than the payday . I guess that when the other siblings come of age mom will do them too because of the fat boring husband/father with the little dick .Oh wait that is another story . By then dad will be so fat , lazy and stupid that he will never know the difference. Still bringing home the bacon though. This should of been put in L/W with a twist . Just another cheating slut with a brain dead son that has no respect or feelings for his Dad ......... WOW Then again this just a story
Oh ya, that's the way I like it. I'm looking forward to a sinful fall, winter, and spring too!
I enjoyed it VERY MUCH!!
Sure, it leaves lots to the imagination. But we all know what's gonna happen. Big, strong Owen's gonna give his doting mother what she wants. Her beautiful boy's gonna shove his big fat prick up his mother's cunt and unload his big young balls up where they both want all his creamy sperm to go.
Please give us more,this story needs more details. It was a good read, can't wait for more.............thanks.................LAROC OF AGES
You left this 1 open for another chapter
IT WAS EXCELLENT AND I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE.
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