Please take me on the next trip. Great story from launch to exit.
One of the best stories I gave read on this site awsome and would live to go on next trip lol
Great story thanks.
A really good story that builds very nicely from the mildly voyeuristic to the inevitable orgy. Lots of nice details, especially the smart trick of matching up couples' initials so we can easily keep track. More distinct personalities beyond Jenna's would have been nice, but the main thing is that a lot of people will get off to this story! Great job.
Nothing more to say, brilliant!
But for one exception. The strength and flow of the river wasn't mentioned. I can imagine the river being 20-40 feet wide and flowing at about 3-5 mph. My exception has to do with all the alcohol apparently consumed during the day. A river is a powerful force and generally river rafting and alcohol shouldn't happen consecutively. There are hidden currents and eddies that can cause problems and aid in drowning. Also, generally life jackets are a good idea.
Ok, i'm off my high horse now and I really loved the story. Although the girls played together, apparently the guys didn't. Would have been hot of the guys sucked each other off too.
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