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Tiresome
Once you've taken out the Ohhhhhh, Yesssssss, Mmmmmmm there is really nothing in it. Pathetic!
@anonymous
Why don't you stop your sniping? Have you written anything that wasn't assigned by a teacher? You appear the pathetic one, especially when you don't say who you are. And to leggykathy, keep writing!! Good effort!!
Why so upset Billddrummer
She's your mother?
Misguided
@anonymous,
You misunderstood my point. I believe new writers benefit from encouragement. You, friend, appear to lack that quality.
Billddrummer
So you're saying that I can continue sniping at the piss poor writing of this author without your encouragement? Well, friend, you're right!
great story please write more
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