All Comments on 'The Business Trip Ch. 01'

Looking forward to them all getting together.

I liked it, please continue.

An ok story, but nearly lost interest in the 3rd paragraph : "They were going to be out her one more night after this one, so Miri suggested to Mark that he off to fix dinner for Becky"

But the rest of the story was not only well edited, it was hot! Can't wait to read more.

Typos happen. Never to ME, mind you, but I've heard they happen to most other people.

More cuckolding.

Is "Willing Cuckolding" by a "Cuckqueen" or pair of Cuckqueens really "Swinging" by another name? Sounds like it to me.

Who knows? But whatever it's called, there's going to be more of it: and I suspect that eventually, the four of them WILL cum together.

and now friends all over and under. TK U MLJ LV NV

Somebody at Literotica added the "swapping," wife-swapping" and "swingers" tags to this story. I didn't realize they did that sort of thing. I hadn't used those tags because I don't think they really apply.

Well, if anybody came here for a "swapping," wife-swapping" or "swingers" story, don't blame me if you feel like a victim of bait-and switch.

I absolutely LOVED the throw-away line... "The panty's came off, and there was fucking!"

Hotter than some authors' two paragraphs on 'the act!'

Crazy thing is that this same thing happened to my husband and me! I was scared to pen my story but I'm glad someone did it for me! Good stuff and I hope the next chapter turns out the same as what happened to us!

Love the parallel development, resistance vs surrender, looking forward to where this leads. And the tone of the narrative is perfect.

And I can't wait for chapter 2!!

I liked it a lot. Sexy. Naughty. Exciting. I could well imagine it happening. But then maybe that's just me! LOL

A bit of cheating and now some revenge sex in the near future for the other couple,or a least I hope they fuck...

Thanks for the read.

Very open minded couples, having read ch2 already, this isn't over by any means. It would be nice not to wait till Aruba for more tension for this reader. This relationship of two couples seems very ok, not sure, well I'm very sure this wouldn't work for us. You have made this seem so casual and was bound to happen. Nicly written by the way.

Need some more action.

Looking forward to the next set of chapters.

Whole bunch of sick dumbasses pretending to be erotic.

Novel plot, but fails to develop what was going between "Mark and Becky" for one month back at home.

Also, what happened after return from The Business Trip.