All Comments on 'Slut Sisters Say Hello'

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JEBarrettJEBarrettover 11 years ago
Totally gross

A real turn-on. Good writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Go to a night school. Your spelling and punctuation are atrocious.

EG;

"Bending down in front of us, so we caught a flash of the red latex panties, she picked up her ivory, tipped hunting crop, slamming it on the table and glowered at us."

The comma after "ivory" clouds the issue with obscuraty.

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