All Comments on 'Nothing Left To Lose'

Move the sentence "At this very moment, I planned to be worse than him." to be the next to last. Do the clean-up to make it flow.

Pressure builds through the full stroke, then 'BANG' at top dead center. Rod breaks and the story is over. Forgive me that bit of metaphor, please.

the dangerous mind develops skills, TK U MLJ LV NV

Terence is a real loser, but the way you wrote about him made me root for him to get his revenge. I read the original stories you based this on, and you captured his loser image perfectly!

I can't wait to read on what's gonna happen to all the other bitches that ruined his life. Don't stop here!

Someone did a follow up on the original three part-story and killed a lot of his foes. But you did a better job to me I hope this is only the start. . Did Literotica remove those stories??? Thanks for sharing.

I see a serial killer in the making

"here is something you can't understand, how i could just kill a man"

I don't know whether terence will end up a serial killer or not, but he's gonna have fun going thru his list hahaha

Score one for the meek and timid, the cuckold wimp. the unfortunate. Let his revenge be slow and glorious.

I hope he diligently goes through his list and tortures and kills them all, they deserve it.

didn't spend anytime with the original series this was based on, or any of the other stories pitched from the original author. NTRmaster HAS to be the most truly EVIL mind, pound for pound, ever to post "fiction" on this site. If there was an ABSENCE of revenge, death, or castration, then this story just wouldn't have been an obvious continuation. I agree with another comment, that the meek, loser, and mentally unstable personality that TODD himself forged in the narrator, was adeptly handled in this treatment. I don't think even FTDS could have taken this story in a better direction. Powerful, if still left a little incomplete in its scope or vision. Good work for a first effort just the same! Thanks!

I like this shit....lol

pointless

vicious

unmerciful

remorseless

unforgiving

vindictive

sadistic

I like this guy

a good start where is the rest of the story?

Please write the next chapters.

I hated what the original author kept doing to Terrence. Todd deserves this and so much more. I like that Terrence is taking his time, I hope Todd can hold on for weeks before giving up the ghost. The rest of his friends and whores all deserve similar punishment. Please be creative. One of the most over due revenges, thank you.

Please make this a series and get even on them all!

Six years and no follow up, and FTDS has stopped writing. Someone else could certainly have a clear shot.

Stories like this one for each one and then rebuild the business. Fuck them all.

Too bad that you didn't keep it going. Enjoyed this one.

Well done. Interesting story. A loser decides to become someone. Fortunately it was primo asshole town jock who took the brunt of his actions.

Needs a follow upGEH0h3

And where is the end?