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Stupid story...a wimpy cuckold-loving author...
...and definately no story worth reading. Wasted time - unless you get off being humiliated.
no loving wife and the central character a.nd masochist and a sadist. frank needs to find a quick exit with whatever he may get. Leave her to rudy and his cock/
An Old Story of Getting What You Ask For
Read Chapter One. Frank is/has been excited about the idea of her having sex with another man.
Well, he dresses her and puts her in an awkward position leading to her figuring okay, why not, and she really enjoyed it - perfect sense to me. Problem, she liked it and while she didn't plan to go further, ticked at hubby, she would write it off to an experience.
Chapter two, she admits to thinking about Rudy and remembers him with pleasure but had no plans to see him or anyone again but - Rudy is at the Mall, Rudy is a gentleman and persuasive, as well stunning and - okay she figures what the hell. Problem, now she is totally into extra marital sex and she now feels that she loves Frank BUT...
Now, bringing Rudy home, telling hubby what is going to happen, screwing Rudy again and then after telling hubby...here is what is going to happen - "You wanted this and Now - I want it too' so...here are the rules.
Hubby hasn't woke up yet - he is now a cuck, no hotwife, no swinging, just a slut hotwife and eventually she'll cage him so...It's The Old Story...Careful!!!
I Loved It
If I could find a girl like that I marry her!! I'm looking forward to #4.
Nice work!
Granted, the sex was a little clinical
Describing your elation at orgasm in the same breath as describing your revenge is never sexy. Revenge is is built from anger, jealousy and hostility, not ecstasy. Although passion is mostly mental, and I guess some folks are wired that way. This started as a "husbands wish too far" story, and while the characters were somewhat stereotypical, the " just desserts " in episode one worked pretty well. In the second, well, ok, she goes for it, having already broken the ice. It's not against her husband then, but for her.
This last chapter was as overdrawn as the characters in it, and kinda went off the rails. Still, I hold no hostility for the characters (who are not real, by the way) nor cast insults at the writer.
See? That was a negative comment, without invective, labeling, or self-righteousness.
Not as good as the first two
I don't like the disrespect of the husband and, even as a woman, I don't like her trying to take charge of everything so completely. It's a partnership and it ought to be equal, so neither should be compelled to do, or agree to, things they don't want.
Yep whatever you want
as soon as you move into your own place. And as you have decided to turn your husbands' fantasies into your slutty reality, I'm sure he'll be asking you to leave soon. After all, who would stay with a whore like you, considering what diseases you might bring home? I hope you enjoy your "new rules' along with your divorce.
ok...
...so we´ve got national wimpy-weeks, have we? Too bad the author gets off writing this crap. Badboy? Badgirl, it seems.
Yep that would happen - NOT!
Even for fiction this story was preposterous. Like any husband would accept her behavior. She's history. The best response to her actions was posted here on Literotica. Laptopwriter wrote a piece "He said no". It's short and to the point and shows what any husband would do in response to a wife's actions. This story was a "zero".
And his new rules?
Do whatever you like. I'll see the attorney tomorrow and start the divorce. You sleep in the extra bedroom and don't touch me. Find yourself a new place to live - you have 2 weeks to get all you stuff and get out. The end. Your ending is so completely ridiculous I'm still laughing. Awful story.
The thought of this story not being great....
You story is very hott and in many instances what happened with myself and my ex. I had talked to her about exploring her sexuality for years and finally we went to a swingers club. The attention she received was very flattering and she opened up pretty quickly. We enjoyed that life for about 4 years and we knew our marriage was not great but the fun we had was amazing. So, keep writing and enjoy your new found sexual freedom.....men are all into this till it happens and some just can't believe what avenues they open up....
Hell, that could work!
In the next chapter, hubby will beg to take pics of the event, maybe some video of the wife demeaning him (I doubt she'll require prompting) then promptly go find a divorce attorney. Hell, with vid and pics, the divorce should be a snap!
I disagree wth all the negative comments
She is cuckolding him, and he's accepting this. Nothing wrong with this story.
She doesn't set the rules
Being a cheating slut, she gave up her rights and his divorce attorney is about to explain the crappy divorce terms to her. Can I have my time back spent reading this drivel?
The new rules?
Is that she can do anything she wants since she's about to be divorced and single. This story has been done multiple times. Your version adds nothing to the mix. It wasn't clever or erotic. You give no reason her husband would accept her rules. So why wouldn't he divorce her? This was also unfinished as a blind man could see he wouldn't accept her ultimatum. Bad story. 1 star.
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