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A Big Shiny Blue Marble Ch. 18

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by Anonymous

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by jpz007ahren08/30/12

Tragedy

That demoness had BETTER FRIKIN LIVE!!! You can't kill off all your adorable toons!!

Epic story otherwise.

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by kiwiplum08/30/12

Yes

Epic

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by JasonRTaylor05/11/14

Another intriguing character

or perhaps two? I can definitely see killing off the young demoness, it reflects the nature that Yuan has been raised to, regardless of the bleeding hearts.
That said, it would be very interesting if she lives - how will Yuan go around (especially in human form) hunting for Red demons to slay if she has a demon with her?
Good story!
Jason

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