All Comments on 'Lily Grows Up'

by LilyO

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Quick ending

I really liked this story until you cut short the ending. :(

All that buildup to just fall flat at the end was disappointing.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 11 years ago
A finely-written

and most arousing piece. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
INCREDIBLE!

Top notch stuff. Intense!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Wow! Best story I've read here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazing!

This story is phenomenal. I really wish you'd write more. I enjoyed this so very much! Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Fucking finally!

It's so hard to find stories like this. Maybe I'm looking in the wrong places but I've spent years weeding through all the tame stories on here. This is what I've been looking for. Thank you!

TeniTeniabout 11 years ago
Perfect

I second someone else's comments. This is precisely the kind of stuff I'm always looking for and is so hard to find. Very good job =)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Errm?... Wah? It's the Master by the way

I'll just take this as a "how not to raise your daughter guide" well written though you're pretty good... In a twisted way hehahahahahahahahahahaha! Master likes!... Doctor Who one not sexual one :P

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More, please!

We want more! This is just what I like.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
finally!

this is the type of stuff I've been looking for! all I can say is thank you and can't wait to read another 1 of your stories. all the other stories I am glad you're in a bar to mild

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Great, just great :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
"I didn't know you were old enough to wear a bra"

Is this guy retarded or something?

FirstContactFirstContactalmost 11 years ago
Great!

Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece of work and fantasy with us.

Finally my browsing through all the other lame "non consent/reluctant" stories was rewarded with something wonderful!

By your way of describing it, I also could "forgive" the moment the female protagonist enjoyed her punishment ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hot

Loved it. Of course He would have said "I didn't know you were old enough to wear a bra." That was Genious! It was those type of details that sent us all over 'the edge' and made it true to character. I want more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
So very hot

As a female this turned me on like crazy and I just masturbated after reading it. Great job with everything you described, and what I really liked about it is how I could really picture a father-daughter scenario, with the daughter being forced into it and not liking it/wanting it to stop but having an orgasm anyway.

Very hot pussy spanking and all around erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Anonymous...

Omggg...I would have liked daddy to strip her naked, lay her across his knees, spread her legs wide apart, and spank her...alternating between sticking his fingers in her little pussy.....or tie her to the bed, with her titties thrust upward, her pussy pushed up, and finger her clit, forcing her to cum again and again, while he watched her little pussy wiggle all over, and her titties jiggle when she came, squirming uncontrollably.

Then he could have invited a friend over, made her strip naked, and again forced her to jiggle her titties, while stroking her clitty to orgasm, while they held her down, legs spread WIDE apart, all naked and exposed.

I loved it when he forced her to expose her naked titties to him.

Great story..omg...hotttttt !!!

mesgirlmesgirlover 10 years ago
one of the best non-consent stories

thank you for that lovely story , certainly helped my imagination :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
this is..

just one sick piece of writing from a totally sick mind. I wish you well...but probably not going to happen. But best of luck anyway...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Vile, sick & disgusting.....exactly how i love them, thank you.

More Please...I agree with other comments about this hot story.

FirediamondFirediamondover 10 years ago
true story?

Somehow that story sounded disturbingly true. I hope for the young woman's sake that this really was fiction.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Yummy

I loved loved your story!! Thank you!

RadovainRadovainover 10 years ago

Superbly written!

PurringPearlPurringPearlover 10 years ago
Hoping just fantasy

very well written, but I hope this is just fantasy and not something that actually happened.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hot

I'm a girl and this story turned me on like crazy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Woah. The difference.

A lot of incest stories are consensual and they have positive things to say about both sides. Lily on the other hand did not. She didn't want it to happen and that's what made it so great. Keep it up!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Sooooo hot!!! Loved the dialogue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

dumb

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Lame finish

It looks like you got tired of writing or ran out of ideas for the ending. I don't like that the dad is stupid, "I didn't know you were old enough to wear a bra". Good storyX, needs improvement and work.

For the people who don't approve of the story... What the hell are you doing here then? This is clearly labeled under nonconsent and incestous.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
wow!

Very hot! I do wish the ending had been more detailed though

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
open legs

I love the way he made her open her legs and show him her pussy. then he told her she had a beautiful pussy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
woah

This story was seriously sexy. It made me want to come reading it. I also believe you could've had a more detailed ending.

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSalmost 10 years ago
Wow

Poor girl abused and mistreated, He has her mind seriously fucked!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Mmmmmmmmmm

Mmmmmmmmmmmmm oh god im gonna cum

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Oh my god!

This made me so wet! I loved the pussy spanking. :) Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I'm a little freaked out right now.

I was looking for a story about a woman getting so horny she looses her mind. This is more about torture and humilation. I proably shouldn't have read it... But it has it's moments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Well...

Your ending fucking sucks ass!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
good start

gave me hot ideas. but its 3 years til my lil girl is 18. i know i have to wait til then but oh what i have to look forward to! i punish her now when she needs it. i don't punish her for nothing but really enjoy it when she's been bad. a lovely set of buttocks that look even better when red.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow

Wow that was incredibly sexy! But I do beleive the ending, the grand finale, could been improved upon! It ends so quickly - you should add more details!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great!

Good story. You should continue this story with more juicy details. Love the pussy spanking and the belt. Good job!

kitkat_166kitkat_166over 8 years ago
Please

Please add another chapter! <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
just sad

Another story about a dad raping his daughter. If this crap turns you on, get some fucking help.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hot

Loved it. My fantasy. I'll look for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Pictures please!

We need some pictures of daddy's cock in his daughter's cunt

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Would give it ten stars

Much better lesson for a thief

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Rushed ending ?

I enjoyed this story a lot. Really had be going, although I feel Like the ending was kind of rushed. Would have loved to have been able to enjoy the final ‘lesson’ for longer than 6 sentences.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

My daddy sent this to me and its awesome. Next time he is here we agreed to do something like this too😍😍😍

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Dreadful

Rape is very bad; incestuous rape even worse. This story has no redeeming features at all!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

My dad used to spank my over his lap and sometimes I felt a finger or two slip down clit. I miss those days....

TKFranksTKFranksabout 3 years ago

Want a daddy to do this to me

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

1. This should never ever happen in real life. This kind of stuff ruins whole lives.

2. BUT, as FANTASY, it's often what people like best.

We just have to keept it separate, right, guys? No guilt for enjoying this kind of fantasy - all the guilt if you ever bring it into real life. Then, and only then, you'll be a bastard.

Toxic_kissToxic_kissalmost 3 years ago

Okay... so the tags for this is humiliation, non con and incest, yet people seem surprised that’s what they got..

Anyway well written story except the ending was rush.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Anyone want to be my daddy ;)?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is rape and borderline pedophilia, and in no form or shape an acceptable scene within BDSM or babygirl/Daddy relationship.

None of the physical aspects, are described realistically or safely.

This girl would need to go to emergency room, and this man will go straight way into prison and life long ban from local bdsm community for assault, rape and bodily harm.

/25 years in bdsm scene

Belladonna1994Belladonna1994over 2 years ago

Great story line I agree the ending was rushed when it seemed like there would be more chapters, wish there was, and I also agree that this is just a fantasy and there are warnings and the tags for this type of story if you don’t like it then read something else don’t have to hate on the writers art for this type of story it gotta be hard typing this out knowing your writing about raping a girl to me that would be kinda hard but also thrilling to write about this fantasy, great job on this story hope you keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A documentary into the way Republicans raise their daughters in rural America.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The power dynamics are what I like and how the girl is made to feel ashamed of her sexual responses and told to suppress them. I don’t know why that turns me on so much, but it does. This story doesn’t waste time with too much set up before it gets into the action and it wraps up quickly. I think the length is perfect. More chapters would be nice where the girl is shamed, instructed to suppress lest she be outed as a slut, then punished when she’s unable to fight her body’s natural responses. Good stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

He should have fucked her in her asshole, that would have been a better punishment and wouldn't run the risk of making her pregnant!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved the story but it ended so abruptly. More detail in the p×ssy spanking and f×cking is needed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Can someone do this to me

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

It's not even incest but a clear form of non consensual rape. What kind of mindset is this that people are writing such inhumane stories and are also getting appreciated in the name of entertainment. Has relations and it's boundaries , morality and humanity just remain a sort of joke making concept for present humans?? You all authors here must be atleast a bit sensitive and think about how negative mindset people will get encouraged after reading such stories and how badly innocent minds will get affected with all these. There are already too many atheists and dirt in this world at present. Please don't encourage more of it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Made me so wet

merrySMmerrySMabout 1 year ago

My lady parts are throbbing. Love great non con stories and this one checked all the boxes and then some. Not normally into incest, but this worked and worked so very well.

Hot, nasty and oh so wrong. Yes the detail about the bra was perfect. That is the type of mind fuck that makes noncon work.

Not only a panty soaker, so well written. Too bad these comments are from 10 years ago and LilyO hasn't written any more.

Akirababe87Akirababe8711 months ago

Lol @anonymous talking about morality and religion in the comments on a porn story site, in the noncon subsection. You know where you are, you heathen, don't play at being high and mighty. Let he without sin cast the first nut.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Loved this sexy story

MarriPetXMarriPetX8 months ago

the ending was a little abrupt, but it was good. i'd love to see more ;)

ToughSailorToughSailor6 months ago

OUCH ! Follow on chapters? I hope so. Keep 'em cumming . . . .

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