by LilyO
I really liked this story until you cut short the ending. :(
All that buildup to just fall flat at the end was disappointing.
This story is phenomenal. I really wish you'd write more. I enjoyed this so very much! Great job.
It's so hard to find stories like this. Maybe I'm looking in the wrong places but I've spent years weeding through all the tame stories on here. This is what I've been looking for. Thank you!
I second someone else's comments. This is precisely the kind of stuff I'm always looking for and is so hard to find. Very good job =)
I'll just take this as a "how not to raise your daughter guide" well written though you're pretty good... In a twisted way hehahahahahahahahahahaha! Master likes!... Doctor Who one not sexual one :P
this is the type of stuff I've been looking for! all I can say is thank you and can't wait to read another 1 of your stories. all the other stories I am glad you're in a bar to mild
Is this guy retarded or something?
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece of work and fantasy with us.
Finally my browsing through all the other lame "non consent/reluctant" stories was rewarded with something wonderful!
By your way of describing it, I also could "forgive" the moment the female protagonist enjoyed her punishment ;-)
Loved it. Of course He would have said "I didn't know you were old enough to wear a bra." That was Genious! It was those type of details that sent us all over 'the edge' and made it true to character. I want more!
As a female this turned me on like crazy and I just masturbated after reading it. Great job with everything you described, and what I really liked about it is how I could really picture a father-daughter scenario, with the daughter being forced into it and not liking it/wanting it to stop but having an orgasm anyway.
Very hot pussy spanking and all around erotic.
Omggg...I would have liked daddy to strip her naked, lay her across his knees, spread her legs wide apart, and spank her...alternating between sticking his fingers in her little pussy.....or tie her to the bed, with her titties thrust upward, her pussy pushed up, and finger her clit, forcing her to cum again and again, while he watched her little pussy wiggle all over, and her titties jiggle when she came, squirming uncontrollably.
Then he could have invited a friend over, made her strip naked, and again forced her to jiggle her titties, while stroking her clitty to orgasm, while they held her down, legs spread WIDE apart, all naked and exposed.
I loved it when he forced her to expose her naked titties to him.
Great story..omg...hotttttt !!!
thank you for that lovely story , certainly helped my imagination :)
just one sick piece of writing from a totally sick mind. I wish you well...but probably not going to happen. But best of luck anyway...
More Please...I agree with other comments about this hot story.
Somehow that story sounded disturbingly true. I hope for the young woman's sake that this really was fiction.
very well written, but I hope this is just fantasy and not something that actually happened.
A lot of incest stories are consensual and they have positive things to say about both sides. Lily on the other hand did not. She didn't want it to happen and that's what made it so great. Keep it up!!
It looks like you got tired of writing or ran out of ideas for the ending. I don't like that the dad is stupid, "I didn't know you were old enough to wear a bra". Good storyX, needs improvement and work.
For the people who don't approve of the story... What the hell are you doing here then? This is clearly labeled under nonconsent and incestous.
I love the way he made her open her legs and show him her pussy. then he told her she had a beautiful pussy
This story was seriously sexy. It made me want to come reading it. I also believe you could've had a more detailed ending.
I was looking for a story about a woman getting so horny she looses her mind. This is more about torture and humilation. I proably shouldn't have read it... But it has it's moments.
gave me hot ideas. but its 3 years til my lil girl is 18. i know i have to wait til then but oh what i have to look forward to! i punish her now when she needs it. i don't punish her for nothing but really enjoy it when she's been bad. a lovely set of buttocks that look even better when red.
Wow that was incredibly sexy! But I do beleive the ending, the grand finale, could been improved upon! It ends so quickly - you should add more details!
Good story. You should continue this story with more juicy details. Love the pussy spanking and the belt. Good job!
Another story about a dad raping his daughter. If this crap turns you on, get some fucking help.
We need some pictures of daddy's cock in his daughter's cunt
I enjoyed this story a lot. Really had be going, although I feel Like the ending was kind of rushed. Would have loved to have been able to enjoy the final ‘lesson’ for longer than 6 sentences.
My daddy sent this to me and its awesome. Next time he is here we agreed to do something like this too😍😍😍
Rape is very bad; incestuous rape even worse. This story has no redeeming features at all!
My dad used to spank my over his lap and sometimes I felt a finger or two slip down clit. I miss those days....
1. This should never ever happen in real life. This kind of stuff ruins whole lives.
2. BUT, as FANTASY, it's often what people like best.
We just have to keept it separate, right, guys? No guilt for enjoying this kind of fantasy - all the guilt if you ever bring it into real life. Then, and only then, you'll be a bastard.
Okay... so the tags for this is humiliation, non con and incest, yet people seem surprised that’s what they got..
Anyway well written story except the ending was rush.
This is rape and borderline pedophilia, and in no form or shape an acceptable scene within BDSM or babygirl/Daddy relationship.
None of the physical aspects, are described realistically or safely.
This girl would need to go to emergency room, and this man will go straight way into prison and life long ban from local bdsm community for assault, rape and bodily harm.
/25 years in bdsm scene
Great story line I agree the ending was rushed when it seemed like there would be more chapters, wish there was, and I also agree that this is just a fantasy and there are warnings and the tags for this type of story if you don’t like it then read something else don’t have to hate on the writers art for this type of story it gotta be hard typing this out knowing your writing about raping a girl to me that would be kinda hard but also thrilling to write about this fantasy, great job on this story hope you keep writing
A documentary into the way Republicans raise their daughters in rural America.
The power dynamics are what I like and how the girl is made to feel ashamed of her sexual responses and told to suppress them. I don’t know why that turns me on so much, but it does. This story doesn’t waste time with too much set up before it gets into the action and it wraps up quickly. I think the length is perfect. More chapters would be nice where the girl is shamed, instructed to suppress lest she be outed as a slut, then punished when she’s unable to fight her body’s natural responses. Good stuff!
He should have fucked her in her asshole, that would have been a better punishment and wouldn't run the risk of making her pregnant!
Loved the story but it ended so abruptly. More detail in the p×ssy spanking and f×cking is needed.
It's not even incest but a clear form of non consensual rape. What kind of mindset is this that people are writing such inhumane stories and are also getting appreciated in the name of entertainment. Has relations and it's boundaries , morality and humanity just remain a sort of joke making concept for present humans?? You all authors here must be atleast a bit sensitive and think about how negative mindset people will get encouraged after reading such stories and how badly innocent minds will get affected with all these. There are already too many atheists and dirt in this world at present. Please don't encourage more of it
My lady parts are throbbing. Love great non con stories and this one checked all the boxes and then some. Not normally into incest, but this worked and worked so very well.
Hot, nasty and oh so wrong. Yes the detail about the bra was perfect. That is the type of mind fuck that makes noncon work.
Not only a panty soaker, so well written. Too bad these comments are from 10 years ago and LilyO hasn't written any more.
Lol @anonymous talking about morality and religion in the comments on a porn story site, in the noncon subsection. You know where you are, you heathen, don't play at being high and mighty. Let he without sin cast the first nut.