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Unbelievable!
Thank you for such a great story - and will read the others asap. Just great! Can feel the young women sucking away! What an ending!!
Took a week ...
Well, it took me almost a week to finish this story which is more like a short novel but in the end it was worth it with one minor discrepancy: Alyson never did tell Dana Lee how she feels. She did try and technology screwed up that effort so I give her credit for her courage although her persistence leaves something to be desired.
Too bad. Somehow, I think Dana Lee would take it well even if she didn't choose to be Alyson's girlfriend.
Excellent story.
There's more to the story
Someone commented that it was disapointing that Dana lee and Aluson didn't hook up, but just so you know, this story is a prequel to a series in which they finally hook up five months later. Please read my Field Trip Follies series to see how their story turns out! Hint: it's a very happy ending!!
Woah!!!
I've read all of the field trip follies and the Sumer ones I love your writing keep it up !! :)
awesome story
great story line. it was amazing how you could keep my attention through out the whole story
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