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by HarryHill08/30/12

Americanized Haiku

often follow the 5/7/5 form ...but rarely show the opposition of the first and last lines.
an interesting write nevertheless

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by tazz31708/30/12

THE TRUTH ABOUT LONELY SMILES

they are the long lost forgotten, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by twelveoone08/30/12

5 btw

Scrap iron lady
plays a sweet flute concerto
to eager-earred ferns
this sounds like a great opener to something more extended

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