Perverts' Anonymous Summer Session

What can you say...another great story

You handle dialogue nicely, I did not like the asian dialogue though it touched a bit racist and pulled me out of the story. I also kind of feel let down at the end. I find myself wishing for more gratification for the members of the meeting as you spent SO much effort making me love them. You have a lot of room to take these well built characters into infinite combinations of wild sexual encounters and twisted sexual taboos it seems a shame the story ends here.

To Angelphoenix

You realize, of course, that this story was posted in the humor category. Right? There was no racism intended just humor on the part of a sexually charged Asian woman who has trouble pronouncing her L's.

You realize, of course, that this story is a contest story and even though I appreciate you writing a comment, you didn't vote. I don't understand why so very many readers, 99.5% don't vote, even during a contest, when all we writings need your voting support.

Unfortunately, most readers don't vote. We writers write for free with the hopes of winning a few dollars in a writing comment.

As far as developing the characters more, this story is already 9,250 words. Had I made the story longer, I'd have readers complaining that the story is too long. Yet, how long must a story be. It needs to be just long enough to tell the story and I think I did that.

I'm sorry you didn't enjoy my story by supporting me with your vote. I'll try to write a better story in the future.

Thank you for reading my story and for your comment.

SusanJillParker

You've struck a chord

It's almost a carbon copy of the last perverts meeting I attended. It isn't easy being a pervert as most of the people reading this already know.

If perversion was recognized as an illness we might be able to get some help, but the only help we get is from other perverts. That's like the fire department trying to put out a fire with gasoline.

Great story.

Cleverly done

You humorously managed to bring in a whole lot of fetishes, whilst writing in the Humor section. Well done.

I think you might have meant "complement" rather than "compliment".

My comment

It's a funny story.

My vote 5 stars.

My hope. that it wins the contest.

A Fun Story

I enjoyed the end scene. It was kind of funny the way that you would tease them while sharing. :)

The Ending made the story

You certainly covered them all......and the ending was perfect!! Of course the accidental exhibitionist would get herself on display. Great how you managed to really introduce each one. I think that is why real NA meetings DON'T let people go into detail about their "drug" of choice.

Talent

Jill has an really good ability to make things dirty and shameful in the best way possible, it is in all her writing.

pervert

The story is good and i think there is a hidden pervert of atleast one type in all of us and some mentioned here are not really there.

Simply marvlous.

Still laughing

My kind of meeting

Being a pervert myself, I can imagine fitting in with this group of sexoholics..Plus I liked how each character was as a blatant stereotype...

you are BAD

Susan Jill Parker you are bad. teasing them like you did .I bet it was worth it at the end . :)

Can't Wait For Next Meeting Perverts Anonymous

Witty, very clever, exquisite timing! This has to be one of the best fictions I've ever read here at Literotica. We all might benefit by attending the next Perverts Anonymous support session, what? But must we wait till next summer for another story from this talented writer? Good job Susan Jill Parker Bravo!

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Susan you tickle my funny bone...