Little Sammy needs a lesson in control....lol
Little does he know, it is actually the Sub that actually controls things. Although this would be a good seiral story, I'm thinking it might work better as some loosely connected, stand-alone stories, where Sam learns the benifits of being a sub to one and the Master to another. Keep writing
Myhands316
This is a truly hot story, but you might want to run the sequal past an editor, just for grammar and usage. Still, terrific job, and I don't usually enjoy the incest stuff. Many thanks.
I think this could have more in it. Life for Samuel afterwards, Brittany's perfect existence unravels with small amounts of defiance, disobedience and her manipulative diva attitude. Soon she's reduced to her brother's slut.
And/or she gets pregnant with her brother's baby.
by
Anonymous08/29/12
Great story. Need chapter 2 with sis and the teacher with Sam.
by
Anonymous08/29/12
Great story as usual!!!
I love you work and can not wait for the next chapter to this story!!
by
Anonymous08/29/12
Love your work...
Would love to see this developed into a series. Keep it going!!
Good start but you need to build more background to expand the storyline. Its quite obvious that both women are sluts and are very willing to play the role of slave. That is enough right there for a couple of chapters. Oh by the way I did give it a 5 so keep up the good work, look forward too more chapters.
I hope there are several more chapters eventually!
I'd like to see more between sister and brother plus on of the sister's uppity friends.
I'd like to see more between sister, Ms. Charles and the brother.
I'd like to see more between Ms.Chrles aa few of her friends and the young man
I'd difinetly like to see more between Ms. Charles and the young man, maybe even back at school.
this was a great story but it was way too short and lacked details , despite that i give it five stars and i hope to see more chapters posted with the whole story unfolding
I enjoyed this thuroughly. I truly hope you continue this story line. I loved everything about this story.
by
Anonymous08/30/12
More please.
How about the next chapter. Ms Charles and the other two teachers and the sister. My favorite author. Backroadbill.
by
Anonymous08/30/12
Hot
Now I wish that I had a dirty video clip of my bitchy big-breasted kid sister. Then I could fulfil my darkest fantasy.
by
Anonymous08/30/12
This was very good, I hope you decide to continue with this.
by
Anonymous08/30/12
Typical Mentality
Big titted cheerleader fucking footballers... and she suddenly changed from being angry to slutty on seeing a huge cock. What a fucking joke!
by
Anonymous08/30/12
so awesome!
This is absolutely perfect! I can't wait for MORE!!
by
Anonymous08/30/12
Very Inspiring
I have a secret video footage of my 13-y-o sister taking a shower. I've pleasured myself many times viewing it. But it never occurred to me that I could put it to better use. I just loved this story!
by
Anonymous08/30/12
Wow, look at all the sad punters who left comments...
Really? Are you (commenters) all that hard up? The concept behind this story has been done to death countless times here on Literotica; a completely unoriginal and tired plot.
Wow it sounds like Gramps over here hasn't had his prune juice lately, come on just because it is old news to you doesn't mean that it could be some old plot to someone else what about all the new members that show up and go wow what a story, your just thinking about yourself and not caring what anyone else thinks, that's pretty arrogant of you not to mention self-centered. Enough ragging on this guy, a decent story to say the least it could have had a few more twists to the story and a bit more filler since it was a bit hurried. But still not half bad
by
Anonymous08/31/12
loved this story
I enjoyed this story. first one I read after I downloaded the android app on my phone.
thank you silkstockingslover!
by
Anonymous08/31/12
How about
The pissy anon commenter try writing a story and see how good they do instead of bitching about everyone here who enjoyed the story.
by
Anonymous08/31/12
Follow-up is a must!
Alright, damn awesome and hot....we need a follow-up, sooner rather than later. Great job!
by
Anonymous08/31/12
Super bitch fuck
I hate and despise my sister. She is, however, by some distance, the best fuck I have ever experienced.
Awesome story. You are my favorite author by far and this one like so many of your others has many ways to go from here. I hope you dont keep us waiting too long for the 2nd chapter
by
Anonymous08/31/12
Blackmailing Bitch Sister
That was hot . How bout more on him and his sister and him fucking his teacher
by
Anonymous09/01/12
My dick...
My dick is so hard from reading your story, I gotta take care of it
It's really stupid to criticize the plot for being stale. Shows a really poor understanding of what "originality" is, and an inability to differentiate between concept and execution.
That said... I see not all my copyedits were taken on board. I still think it would be very much more refined for contest submission purposes if they were.
this was a very hot story. you no i love when someone is blackmailed use and abuse against there own will. its such a turn on to see someone get off using others. i don't no why but my black cock loves it. i think i have a secret demon side deep down inside me. i love this story especially him using his school teacher. of course being somewhat submissive. would of love to see the tables turned on him and he be used and abuse by his teacher. like her getting him into a position were she takes him some were and have him used and abused on cam. then she takes control over him and her big sister. maybe get him on cam submitting to his former teacher. having do naughty things on cam like sucking her big dildo after she had it up his sisters or someone else ass. making him give her everything he has on his sister and making him submit to her. putting things in there proper place. his sister can give and sell him to who ever she wants. he becomes nothing but a piece of property. use and abuse the way he was ment to be. the tables turned he becomes his sisters life long secret slave. she can make him be her and her friends toilet slave if she desires and there is nothing he can do about.
I enjoyed your story very much. The sex scenes are very hot.
I would have given you 5 stars if there wasn't a little problem. Why does he have to have a big dick?
Clearly his sister likes to be dominated. It would have been much better to see her submiting to him little by little. She would have loved the domination but couldn't face to accept it because it's her brother...
As for the teacher, she likes him apparently. A little blackmail who turns in romance could have been a nice plot.
But no, here it is BAM he has a big cock and all the women became sluts.
by
Anonymous09/02/12
Not bad...
Too fast to the sucking and fucking, though. How about a little making out including breast play. Remember, getting there is the journey.
I greatly enjoed the story and am looking forward reading additional parts to this saga... Unlike some of the comments written, I do beleive that the author wanted
these women to be percerived as closet submissive sluts, that the size of Samuels' equiptment would causes them to display their true nature... The plot moved along at a reasonable pace for a two page Literotica story... By the way I ratted this story 5 star...
what a fucking HOT story -- total jackoff material :-)))
everything a horny guy could ask for ... lesbian sex, boy/teacher sex (we need the sequel where he fucks her brains out!), and teenage sex, including a HOT facial!
like a said ... total hot horny jackoff material, yummmmm :-)))
sam
English
Great story
Silk you are on great story writer... and this is one of my fav on literotica .. great job
Please make this one of your continuing story series.
Excellent job
I too would like it to be serialized.
Great
You got contest locked up, Keep it CUMMING
Great Job !
This is a hot story and I hope very much that you do more with it . Good luck !
Been a long time haven't seen story this good.
Love the pace.
Please, continue.
Who is in control of whom
Little Sammy needs a lesson in control....lol
Little does he know, it is actually the Sub that actually controls things. Although this would be a good seiral story, I'm thinking it might work better as some loosely connected, stand-alone stories, where Sam learns the benifits of being a sub to one and the Master to another. Keep writing
Myhands316
awesome
great story! good lubmck in the contest.
Woah...
Soooo hot!
great content...
This is a truly hot story, but you might want to run the sequal past an editor, just for grammar and usage. Still, terrific job, and I don't usually enjoy the incest stuff. Many thanks.
Hawt!
I think you have a winner here that's begging for a sequel or three. Good luck!
YUMMY LICIOUS
Bravo! Wunderbar! Please work on next sequel before of 2013summer . Love your work !
I think this could have more in it. Life for Samuel afterwards, Brittany's perfect existence unravels with small amounts of defiance, disobedience and her manipulative diva attitude. Soon she's reduced to her brother's slut.
And/or she gets pregnant with her brother's baby.
Great story. Need chapter 2 with sis and the teacher with Sam.
Great story as usual!!!
I love you work and can not wait for the next chapter to this story!!
Love your work...
Would love to see this developed into a series. Keep it going!!
More please
This one was definitely toooo short (pardon the anti-pun). You just got started then left us hanging.
Good start needs another chapter
Good start but you need to build more background to expand the storyline. Its quite obvious that both women are sluts and are very willing to play the role of slave. That is enough right there for a couple of chapters. Oh by the way I did give it a 5 so keep up the good work, look forward too more chapters.
Great Story Line
I hope there are several more chapters eventually!
I'd like to see more between sister and brother plus on of the sister's uppity friends.
I'd like to see more between sister, Ms. Charles and the brother.
I'd like to see more between Ms.Chrles aa few of her friends and the young man
I'd difinetly like to see more between Ms. Charles and the young man, maybe even back at school.
i need more
this was a great story but it was way too short and lacked details , despite that i give it five stars and i hope to see more chapters posted with the whole story unfolding
silkstockings Lover always hits the spot
Very hot
A very hot and exciting story. I wish it had been longer though and I hope you will write more chapters.
Truly excellent!
I enjoyed this thuroughly. I truly hope you continue this story line. I loved everything about this story.
More please.
How about the next chapter. Ms Charles and the other two teachers and the sister. My favorite author. Backroadbill.
Hot
Now I wish that I had a dirty video clip of my bitchy big-breasted kid sister. Then I could fulfil my darkest fantasy.
This was very good, I hope you decide to continue with this.
Typical Mentality
Big titted cheerleader fucking footballers... and she suddenly changed from being angry to slutty on seeing a huge cock. What a fucking joke!
so awesome!
This is absolutely perfect! I can't wait for MORE!!
Very Inspiring
I have a secret video footage of my 13-y-o sister taking a shower. I've pleasured myself many times viewing it. But it never occurred to me that I could put it to better use. I just loved this story!
Wow, look at all the sad punters who left comments...
Really? Are you (commenters) all that hard up? The concept behind this story has been done to death countless times here on Literotica; a completely unoriginal and tired plot.
Really Anonymous
Wow it sounds like Gramps over here hasn't had his prune juice lately, come on just because it is old news to you doesn't mean that it could be some old plot to someone else what about all the new members that show up and go wow what a story, your just thinking about yourself and not caring what anyone else thinks, that's pretty arrogant of you not to mention self-centered. Enough ragging on this guy, a decent story to say the least it could have had a few more twists to the story and a bit more filler since it was a bit hurried. But still not half bad
loved this story
I enjoyed this story. first one I read after I downloaded the android app on my phone.
thank you silkstockingslover!
How about
The pissy anon commenter try writing a story and see how good they do instead of bitching about everyone here who enjoyed the story.
Follow-up is a must!
Alright, damn awesome and hot....we need a follow-up, sooner rather than later. Great job!
Super bitch fuck
I hate and despise my sister. She is, however, by some distance, the best fuck I have ever experienced.
sequel please
Awesome story. You are my favorite author by far and this one like so many of your others has many ways to go from here. I hope you dont keep us waiting too long for the 2nd chapter
Blackmailing Bitch Sister
That was hot . How bout more on him and his sister and him fucking his teacher
My dick...
My dick is so hard from reading your story, I gotta take care of it
It's really stupid to criticize the plot for being stale. Shows a really poor understanding of what "originality" is, and an inability to differentiate between concept and execution.
That said... I see not all my copyedits were taken on board. I still think it would be very much more refined for contest submission purposes if they were.
very hot
this was a very hot story. you no i love when someone is blackmailed use and abuse against there own will. its such a turn on to see someone get off using others. i don't no why but my black cock loves it. i think i have a secret demon side deep down inside me. i love this story especially him using his school teacher. of course being somewhat submissive. would of love to see the tables turned on him and he be used and abuse by his teacher. like her getting him into a position were she takes him some were and have him used and abused on cam. then she takes control over him and her big sister. maybe get him on cam submitting to his former teacher. having do naughty things on cam like sucking her big dildo after she had it up his sisters or someone else ass. making him give her everything he has on his sister and making him submit to her. putting things in there proper place. his sister can give and sell him to who ever she wants. he becomes nothing but a piece of property. use and abuse the way he was ment to be. the tables turned he becomes his sisters life long secret slave. she can make him be her and her friends toilet slave if she desires and there is nothing he can do about.
Why does he have to be big?
I enjoyed your story very much. The sex scenes are very hot.
I would have given you 5 stars if there wasn't a little problem. Why does he have to have a big dick?
Clearly his sister likes to be dominated. It would have been much better to see her submiting to him little by little. She would have loved the domination but couldn't face to accept it because it's her brother...
As for the teacher, she likes him apparently. A little blackmail who turns in romance could have been a nice plot.
But no, here it is BAM he has a big cock and all the women became sluts.
Not bad...
Too fast to the sucking and fucking, though. How about a little making out including breast play. Remember, getting there is the journey.
Enjoyable Story
I greatly enjoed the story and am looking forward reading additional parts to this saga... Unlike some of the comments written, I do beleive that the author wanted
these women to be percerived as closet submissive sluts, that the size of Samuels' equiptment would causes them to display their true nature... The plot moved along at a reasonable pace for a two page Literotica story... By the way I ratted this story 5 star...
A good hot story
Thanks very much for another horny tale of teenage sexuality.
As I couldn't write anything as literate or as erotic I shall not criticise, just enjoy!
Pete
Good.
I liked it but I was hoping that the "bitch sister" would have been sexually humiliated and abused more.
More
Would love to see a continuation. Maybe the teacher nd sister bein made to play together or something. But overall good story
great tale
nice one would you be up for more chapters
fucking HOT :-)))
what a fucking HOT story -- total jackoff material :-)))
everything a horny guy could ask for ... lesbian sex, boy/teacher sex (we need the sequel where he fucks her brains out!), and teenage sex, including a HOT facial!
like a said ... total hot horny jackoff material, yummmmm :-)))
sam
Yes Master
I totally agree - "Yes, Master" are two of the hottest words in the English language... Absolutely wonderful! Juices are fully running....
Good story
Usually not a fan of blackmailing, but this was good. Hope you will continue the series adding the teacher.
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