A Big Shiny Blue Marble Ch. 20

Poetry

Poetry

love it

You have an epic story going. I absolutely love it, you have drawn me in like so few do, I look forward to the upcoming chapters. I like the way you keep each thread of the story going by switching to each one for s while and then moving on to the next part. I look for your work at least twice each day wanting my fix,lil. Love it don't stop writing

Very good.

If you killed Yuan...

I will be extremely pissed. As will, no doubt, many of your other readers.
Other than that, great chapter.

Killed Yuan?

ROFL, Now why would I kill Yuan? Keep reading, friend.

Superb writing

You've really done a marvelous job with these characters and the weaving together of their stories, background and personalities.
From so much loss will hopefully come much greater joy.
Jason

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With all the hurt going on in your story, I would be surprised if the next chapter begin like:
"His eyes slowly opened. His vision blurry. His consciousness quickly remembering the cyrogenic tube he lay in. Yes, Steve McHennison, the world's greatest therapist has awoken....and he was gonna solve some peoples shit." :)

ROFL

That's good, my friend. Very, very good.