The Backside of Nowhere

Good scene

But I hope it's not the whole story. There's lots left to tell.

more

This could turn into a good book maby a movie

Another Good One Tx.

I've been enjoying your storied for a while now. The older you get the better the stories and the better you write. I wonder if it is the old adage: "Practice, practice, practice."

I may have to take that to hearty and give it a shot. Five of them funny little criss crossy things. (*)

Mike

needs to be longer

expand this please. more of the future and his past. i really like this character.

Another

Please write another chapter or a longer version.

Great Story

Is it auto biographical?

In the voice of Elmer Fudd I hates loudmouth punks

In my head

In my head I pictured him kinda having a Elmer Fudd voice just kinda for the word pattern's . kinda had the whole soft voice but carrying a Big stick

As one who rides !!!

I ride with a men's social club with a motorcycle problem (UMF of America) and a good biker story is always good to come by. And my bike is a 1600 cc Yamaha Road Star Limited edition. (a birthday present from my lovely wife) !!!

thanks for the chuckles

and the fun story

thinking

my kind of thinking great story. keep them coming