All Comments on 'Fun'

for being shy and retiring, TK U MLJ LV NV

The first verse is brilliant but it does seem to fade away after that. There again I suppose getting into one's cups is anti climactic - a little like the way this verse is shaped.

Not sure if the line in verse four " I surely won't get mixed in it –" quite scans with the rest of the verse - the rhythm seems slightly forced.

Sweet O.

*chuckles* Actually, I'm not much for "fun" like this, either, so I fully appreciate the way the speaker starts out happily enough, but ends up deserting at the first opportunity! That sounds like me! *grins*

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