All Comments on 'Bad Back'

I found this very hard to read due to the flow being stop/ start because of the dialogue

I didn't really like it. There was too much dialogue and not enough story.

It made the flow difficult and it made it difficult to enjoy. I love descriptions.

Also, it would have been better if the character had more character, the guy was non-existent and the lady was pretty boring herself.

Love it, thermisterbaldwin, thank you! Great concept, and nice buildup. Very hot!

Loved it, hermisterbaldwin, thank you! Great concept, and nice buildup. Very hot!