This will be nothing like War & Peace. I'm nowhere near that gifted a writer. You'll see characters move into and out of the spotlight here and there, and when I leave them, I try to have them in a good place, since it may be the last time that we see them. That won't always be possible, sadly, as you saw in Hank's case.
These three characters are funny and sweet. Young love across cultures against a real need to band together for survival. It's cute watching these two relatively inexperienced females try to reel in their even less experienced male.
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Super story, feels like more characters than War & Peace, every time the focus changes my initial reaction is the same.
No don't change focus, I want to know what happens to ... quickly followed by, oh this is interesting , more new faces.
I don't know how Taltos is managing this but its working. Many thanks for sharing the story with us.
Thank you, but ...
This will be nothing like War & Peace. I'm nowhere near that gifted a writer. You'll see characters move into and out of the spotlight here and there, and when I leave them, I try to have them in a good place, since it may be the last time that we see them. That won't always be possible, sadly, as you saw in Hank's case.
damn...
And here I was, hoping for some hot dragon-girl sex.
Oh well, there's always next chapter! ;)
These three characters are funny and sweet. Young love across cultures against a real need to band together for survival. It's cute watching these two relatively inexperienced females try to reel in their even less experienced male.
Dragging it out!
Actually I love it, though I really want to see more... and it's desperately LATE and I need sleep and I need to know and dammit!
lol
Jason
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