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by Anonymous

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by tazz31708/31/12

ON BUYING A SUB

and know not what to do with, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by twelveoone09/02/12

ok

was torn between a 4 and 5, you got a 5. i like where it goes, it would have been nicer if it didn't take that long, i.e. a little more edit, little more punching up

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by deliciousthoughts10/18/12

Loved it...

... absolutely loved it :)

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by Anonymous12/14/12

better

Was convinced no one deserved a 5 . . . til I read it (& I'm a lit major).

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by guysimple167404/14/13

The conclusion was super

every good creation leaves an impression, it's the conclusion that matters most, and indeed, here it was awesome.

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