All Comments on 'The Not So Private, Private Cavern'

if she was such a bitch no way he would fuck her and no way she would want him to keep it atleast some what believable please this isn't the fantasy area.

Her folks didn't want her to date. Her new aunt hated her mother. In short she felt she was an outsider so being bitchy would keep such folks away, even though she felt drawn to Tim. So being caught by him was, in a way, a relief and things just naturally followed from there. Seems clear at the end, a threesome was coming up.

WOW this was a good start here & like other reader said there is a 3 some coming but first think he should fuck the bitch she is a virgin i think & then a 3some maybe in chapter 2 where is it Mr.Demaizefield.

She is on her knees felating him and his hand is playing with her cunt? I wonder how is that possible. Hm...

A little too short, and it cries out for a follow-up, either set that same day or shortly afterwards.

Thanks for all of your comments on this post. I appreciate the feedback. Part two will be coming up shortly.

Also, for clarification, she was not on her knees. She was laying back and propped herself up on one arm. Thank you for the feedback though.

Please write more on these characters.

Oh my god I got so close to pop just from reading. Please make a part 2. You left it open for add on, I can't wait.