All Comments on 'And I'll Get a Pole'

focus on not seining the crabs, TK U MLJ LV NV

Got to love those MILFS. Different from Nude Holly Day, but still hot as hell. Loved it! Good luck in the contest.

You built the tension just right!

great story, loved it

Thanks to everyone who voted, commented, or added me as a favorite. One of them really surprised me LOL Glad you enjoyed this little romp. If you haven't already, check out my other contest story, "Nude Holly Day".

great story. well written. the passion and desire jumps off the screen.

Okay now I can make comments on the stories without worrying I'm encouraging trolls.Grin.

This was very well done and I loved it. I've only every had sex outside with a tent over my head, but it is a whole different world of fun. You captured that well.

I usually try to find a crit to offer to help the writer with his writing, but I didn't see one. Damn good story.

M.S.Tarot

Enjoyed the setup, the chance meeting, the playful introduction and the pause to reconsider the possibilities. Well developed situation of "who" is the driving force, when the circumstances of time, place, enviironment and emotional needs stimulate each partner's intentions to switch from a tease to a seduction. It's a shame the encounter, if in real life, might mandate such a meeting be a one time mating, while the setup is there for each sister, and the group, to evolve into further episodes of adventure all weekend ... And beyond. You know you can craft more erotic meetings.

Absolutely; not going to put if off any longer!

Thanks for making me incredibly hot and bothered. Great writing.

Loved it,earthy,genuine and hot..Well done.

and another that begs for sequels.

I mean C'Mon; that was freakin hot & both parties know that it'd be hard to beat. Circumstances helped with the getting together & increased the intensity, but the orgasms where w-a-y off the norm. Seems that for whatever reason; that could be a good thing for both of them. If it were me; it'd be hard to walk away from.... DKP

That was a great story. Please keep them coming. Can't wait for part 2 or something similar. I like reading milf stories.

Good fishing story with some hot MILF sex thrown in! Five stars! Wish there was more including the sisters!

You are now added to my preferred authors list, thank you.

Reject Reality; My Ass!! YOU Wrote This So Full Of Emotion No Doubt This Should Be A True Story! Loved The Build Up To The Exciting, Never Mind The Ten Pound Catfish! Fun Ending!

This is the fourth chapter of a short novel, surely?

My ultimate fishing fantasy!

Another great story to feed my daydreams!

Such an excellent tale, had a similar situation with bosses daughter.

Can't wait to read more of your work