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WHENEVER CHANGE IS INEVITABLE
its usually in status, style and living, TK U MLJ LV NV
The curse was a blessing!
Fun Story. The heroine was quite a gal and had to work hard to get into his
pants...
Delightful
This story begs for more adventures of this character and his associates, but has reached a very satisfactory conclusion. The protagonist's growing into the hero at the story's conclusion was fun even if forced by a convenient curse. Thank you sir and 5 stars all the way through. Oh yes as a pervert I would enjoy more juicy nasty sex but your story is so interesting I tend to forget that fact lol. Thanks
#2 AFTER A LIFE OF DEBAUCHERY
in old age, even the black sheep needs a safe pasture, TK U MLJ LV NV
arc deco
dying to see some more of the zephyr can you let us know when another installment might com . By the way Like ususl Great story
very good
I truly enjoyed this story.you have become one of my favorite writers.please continue to write these great stories. ron from the usa
Well written, well crafted story
It is wonderful to read a well written, well crafted story. you can really get invested in it. Thank you.
Loved it
Great story - well written in a believable historical / fantasy universe. More please!!
good story, but.....
I really like this whole story and setting, but....
- this story had very little mind control involved in it, maybe just 3 of the 9 chapters.
- there was like no sexual content in the entire story, that it could just be a PG story on any other site.
- the story had a complete ending to it, at least for this character, and this could have been a very good character/setting that more stories, if done right, could be produced and I would have liked to have read more in this setting.
that was me
That was me that wrote the above story, I just forgot to log on.
whoops
Ok, that was typed wrong on my tablet and it seems to be auto-correcting some words. That previous comment was from me.
Good storey, bit long winded, I hope there is another storey in this series.
Lovely story, so well written and indeed with a high level of amusement and excitement. By the end I was wishing it was a computer game that I could play, like Assassin's Creed or Rogue, just to take the story further.
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