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Holly's Adventures

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by Anonymous

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by KingCuddle09/03/12

SUDDENLY HOT!!

Nice writing. Fast moving.

Almost screenplay-like.

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by Averygoodlay09/03/12

Total BS

Total BS, When will people who write these stories ever learn where the Hymen is located?
Plunging two fingers deep into her pussy? If there were a Hymen it would have been torn then.
Could have been a good story except for that and the ever present blow job from a Virgin.

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by Anonymous09/03/12

A rather typical story from Literotica

Girls with the mentality of 12 but with big tits and an even bigger label of 18. Men with 7 plus inches cock. And the rest is pure acrobatics.

And then there is an idiot like Averygoodlay to preach gynecology...

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by Anonymous09/03/12

Too brief, but nice.

yeah, of course it's total bullshit, it's fiction DUH!

It's erotic fantasy, and as long as it entertains/arouses the reader it doesn't need to be realistic. The virgin nymphomaniac who can give a great blowjob is practically an archetype of male erotic fantasy!

As for the hymen, yes MOST hymens would be broken by a 2 finger fuck, however unbroken hymens vary from effectively non-existent to imperforate (ie no opening, requiring surgery to let the menstrual flow escape), so it's conceivable that a hymen would be unbroken by a 2-finger fuck, but broken by a largish penis. It's unlikely, but so is the whole story!

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by Anonymous09/03/12

Yeah, just wish Averygoodlay would stop writing BS about other's stories

Got it?

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by Sailor6109/08/12

A very good, but short, story. Please don't stop writing.

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