Eternal Passion

Great job

I think this story is worthy of another chapter,you have a great talent for how to set up a scene with your characters and a great follow-through at the story's climax

Great

A wunderfull story. You are very talented.

Great Job Maite

The Story is super in english. I like it very much.

Kisses
Ava

to be continued?

I hope! its an awesome Story.
Follow it.

I like it

I like both versions. It`s a great story.

thx

i like that best

in german and in englisch. It´s a wunderfull lovestory.

Thanks
Frechesbiest

MaitreNuit, you did it well

A great Lovestory, Reading fluently. It makes a lot of fun

Thank U

Dark

Thank you all, folks!

I'm really grateful you like this little story of mine, and I hope you'll also like my other stories, once they are published on the english board.

About a sequel to this story:
Sorry folks. This story is supposed to stand alone, and I never even thought about writing a following part.
In my opinion this would ruin the atmospheare of the story and was also never intended by me.

Nevertheless I sure, you will be satisfied by my other stories.

Your
MaitreNuit

Great written

Lovely Story.
I like it very much

Nicely done

Beside the slightly bumpy language, the story is really convincing and proves your talent. You paint a very colorful picture of love, passion and devotion, centering a human and a vampire as parts of a loving couple.
I must confess, your accuracy is just amazing, describing even the smallest details and offering almost a movie to your reader.
I really like your story.

Great

I like it!

Nice one!

I very much enjoyed it. Short but sweet.

Unbelievable

You wrote this as a teenager? What a great talent had dawned already back there! No wonder your stories were that good. You are truly gifted.
A male teenager who not only knows there is a difference between erotic and porn, but is also able to write great erotica.

Great job! Do it again!

You really captured the essence of a soul mate. Wrote it well. Then translated to english. Awesome. Thank you for translating. I would have missed out. :)