1st Time in a Sex Shop

Sex shops ... lol

I always found it fascinating how men and women could casually talk sex as if they were talking about the order of the day! However, I've never been as lucky as you to go all the way in a shop ... but I am a man and men don't have it as easily as you gals do!

Loved where it was going, but ended to abruptly. Please continue the story.

Wife agreeed

Mywife if she was here would agree with you. She visited a book store and before she left for home she had taken care of 6 men. Theyhad laid her on a to\abler and each took her several times. She enjoyed it as she told me about it.

Not too bad

But it did feel a bit rushed, especially at the end. Pacing is important in any story, and erotica is no different. It was a good start and a nice idea though. Keep writing.

Very Nicely Done!

I for one prefer stories that are shorter rather than overly wordy! A nicely painted picture is better than a series of cartoons! I enjoyed your story exactly because you didn't go overboard with endless description! You let me (your reader) fill in the blanks! You inspired my imagination twice; first, as the clerk and then as the slut! Please do continue to write!!!

Please ... more!!!

When will you ...

finish this story? Loved it so far, was surprised at the abrupt cut-off

i wish i could get fucked like this......

I always want a group public sex...this story is awesome..i liked it