All Comments on 'Fucked By Chance'

You would have a good story here if you had an editor and maybe if you proof read it. It was very choppy in some places which made it hard for me to understand, and then you left out words in sentences. It was a difficult read. Please invest some time into finding an editor.

Story is too short, maybe you can flesh it out with some plot and story arc.

You had a lot of spelling errors,u said sperms instead of sperm.You kept repeating yourself.It had nothing new.I could summarize the story in ONE sentence. "The father in law fucked the daughter in law behind the husbands back and they lived happily fucking ever after."

A good storyline but I wanted to read more, and for her to become her father in law's little slut

Thanks for the read.

So good.

Same hapnd to me too.

Great . I love it.

I was hoping father-in-law would knock her up with all that semen.