A Proper Young Woman's Guide to Anal Etiquette Ch. 00

Great start

I am amazed at how much potential this story has. I do hope you keep building the world by staying with the public/private aspects. The idea of the proper outside hiding the plugs, clamps and other devices is what will set this story apart from so many others.

Confused...

How can Naomi be petite AND on the tall side at the same time?

Patience...

I submitted chapter 0 and chapter 1 at the same time. Chapter 1 is still in approval. Give it a few days.

As far as the 'petite' thing goes, I was thinking more along the lines of a body type, not so much a height, so I stand corrected.

I'd be very interested to check out the rest of this story, once it's approved...and once you carry on writing. It has a lot of potential, and I really appreciate the level of up-front detail put into these characters, and also the level of variation between them. On a more base note, the focus on anal sex also doesn't go amiss.

I like this. Keep on writing will you? I'll certainly read all of it.

I'ma lookin forward to mor of yor storie.

It seems as if one tail will come after the other, and that'sa way it ought ta b...

OK Let the fun begin

I just discovered this writer and it sounds like I'm going to enjoy his work.

Brilliance one paragraph in.

This gets four stars purely for the disclaimer, and that's all I've read so far. Five if the story is good, of course.

That Should Keep Those Minors Out!

Thanks! I had fun writing that disclaimer. Hopefully, after you've read the actual stories, you'll come back and give them all 5's.