Stang, the last two one did not light a fire in my soul like many of previous stories. Want to ty for this great story.
Great story for a change from you. However how did you and your editor miss the fact that Kathy's lawyer jumped between being a he/she? Couldn't make up your mind there huh?
falls back on the daughter-in-law.....TK U MLJ LV NV
but only for things one did or does.....not a set-up, entrapment frame job.....now who needs remorse down the road, TK U MLJ LV NV
I prefer French arthouse. 3*
she has the same length of time and with more devious personnel to plan her payback and he is going to be set in new ways and most vulnerable,,,,,TK U MLJ LV NV
but this was definitely better than the average.At the same time, I think it was a lot better at the first 'end' and the bit tacked on after that reduced it quite a lot.
Stick a fork in the quality that once made Stang's stories fresh, funny, innovative and thought provoking . It's done. With the death rattle finally sounded by this tripe that seems to have inspired by Jerry Springer Banned From TV DVD set on infinite loop.
The passing of aforementioned,beloved, literature worthy tale- telling ability of Stangstar was a difficult one that lingered ad senilium when stories seemed to become inferior clones of previous weeks submissions. Alas the word processor that click, clacks weekly fast and inspired sagas lasted two years ( approximately ) long.
Contributions and flowers by the bereaved fans of writing talent can be sent to 1-800-MUS-PIMP-MUS-TANG.. Survivors include the actual Stangstar , his wife AlleyKat . There was a ex-wife to the immortal story weaving skill who is reputedly alive but hopefully covered in festering boils ( or so reads the last will & testament).
SS06 what have u become: a mass production writer? Just churning out any shit? Lost respect for you bro!!!
If you don't have a quality story don't post. Wait a while, write something decent then post it. I prefer quality than quantity.
You are churning these out stories like Mariah Carey songs. Have some pride man, you are one of the best writers here but when u post shit like this, u lose all credibility.
What has happened- married life zapped your creative juices? Not worth rating you this week.
This is the most chuckle filled story not written by HDK on all of Literotica. Good Stuff!!
For all the haters out there, stop being cucks. This was a fantastic story. He ensured the bitch got what she deserved.
I thought this story was going to be ironic and or somewhat humourus. But it was just another boo hoo rant from a dickless man who has to blame a woman for his own inadaquacies.
I have never read a cheating wife story, written from the husband's perspective, that includes any sort of prior conversation in which the reader hears "I'm unhappy with this relationship. Our marriage isn't what it used to be. I need things to be different and here's what I want..." All these husband perspective stories are based on "out of the blue, for no apparent reason, totally clueless she was unhappy..." dip wad of a husband desperately blaming anyone and everyone but himself for his failed relationship.
From a trapped wife who has been begging for change for the last 4 years and getting almost no response...Men are stupid cowards who are emotionally constipated and wouldn't know how to please a woman with a road map and a hands on tutorial.
I liked this story. Unlike most of the crap that is posted in this catagory, this story left the husband's balls in tact. The bitch wife got exactly what she deserved. To bad his slut mother never got what she deserved. I don't like some of mustang man's stories, but this one gets 5 stars
I couldn't get past the fifth paragraph because the writing was resonating with the essence of some butt hurt immature boy. You sound fixated on making everyone else seem inferior for a problem you're obviously the cause of.
Does this rant sound like the rationalizations of a cheating spouse , or what? What a cliche.
SS06 you should write comedy.
Thanks for sharing another fine story!
absolutely great,,,,,,,,,,about the anonymous haters calling it immature.........let me guess women right!!!!. only sluts would hate this story coz they want their cake.........and u know the rest. won't suit them if things started happening like this in real life.........and men acted like men.
I don't feel sorry for you... I used to BE you. I got out and my life got
Better. My problem is that you seem to be taking your frustration with
Your life out on a fictional story instead of addressing your very
Real issues. My husband writes something different every week, He
Often changes styles from story to story. If you noticed last week he
Wrote a story where the couple got back together and blended in
Elements of Dickens. Half of you hated it because the guy took his wife
back in the end. So this week he wrote a comedic piece that turned
Into a revenge story. And it looks like again half of you will hate it. I guess
That's why my writing career is over. I did it once and that was it.
I think he and Kate should just work on his their book and leave the
Arm chair critics who complain no matter what behind. Last week and
A couple of the early comments floored me. Half of the people last week
Thought he'd written an 11 page story and wrote that it was too long
The people who did that only proved that they were stupid. It's the same
for the morons today who didn't read more than 5 paragraphs but still
Felt the need to share their opinions. My last statement goes out to the
Poor people, who for some reason are forced to read his stories week
After week. Who is holding the gun to your heads? Here's an option.
You never know what you're going to get from him week to week. All
He gives you is a story. Some you'll like others you'll hate. Like in life
There are no guarantees. If that's too much for you don't read them. But by
All means please feel free to get a life. I apologize to my hubby and
Kate for my rant
I know EXACTLY how they are going to end. Why is that? You're a good writer but you're stuttering now.
hawkeye0007, no matter what he writes it is still better then the crap from the sickos.
Loved every word, particularly "Kum by Yah and trying to do the wave". Thank the lord I was not drinking coffee at the time. Clearly one of your best stories in some time.
Loved this one, it's getting 5 stars. AlleyKat86? I loved yours as well. Any haters...well they know what they can do. If you do decide to write again take a page out of JPB's book and write for yourself, not anyone else.
StangStar06, you keep on doing what you do.
This one was OK, but the story petered out towards the end. The conclusion & epilogue were painfully anti-climatic. Still, the conflict and characters were compelling and unique...good job.
Keep up the good work! I gave this story 5*. I may not like all your stories, but your writing is great and keep it up. Just remember "opinions are like a**holes, everyone has one"! : )
5 for pure giggle factor.
Glad to see your litening up a little bit. The dark side doesn't agree with your writing to well.
Oh yeah, makin humour from what so many readers take too seriously, note some of the comments - burn the bitch bad and gettin on with life - good stuff . . .
Awww... and I liked the Adam commercials on the radio so much too...
Ooops! Carl/Brian/Hubby compromised himself several ways. He outed his new town, he outed his buddy (Sweetie should be able to figure out that it was a collaborative set-up from his very unwise prison visit!) * Hubby also has a permanent vulnerability - his 'Stang (which Sweetie MAY have noticed was a problem shared with his buddy!) and perhaps even the 'Stang club! Time for a Switcheroo to a Stdebaker?
Hubby now ALSO is taking on Sweetie2 (who WAS a goody buddy of Sweetie1). Also an easy link to follow! Not sure she would not have converted to Carpet-Muncher after five years, or at least figured out that the Brian-Train had left the station for good! SS06 probably would NOT write a follow up on a GoldiHawk driver!
Enjoyable read, worth a Fiver, but not a Fav! No more hermaphro lawyers!
Thank you again for writing for us. tom anon
For LordSlumDog: As you have declared Stang's writing ability DOA with no chance of resusitation, I never expect to see anymore of your pompous, asinine comments on future stories of his.
Had to stop and bang on my desk several times. Great fun.
i could not quit laughing - bet your wrote this after the honeymoon. a very good read and the wife was not a complete dunce; close but not complete. glad you are back in the groove. 5
Loved the PS ending.
You got me again! Man you are the best. Keep'em comin. hodunk
Nice work, with or without the epilogue. Definitely, this tale is a unique approach to an old story concept. Write on!
All I can say is AMEN!
Nor was it the worst of SS06. At least it wasn't one of the festering femdom cuckold pieces of shit that seem to plague this hub these days. I saw shit borrowed from other sources but over all I liked it. It wasn't very realistic but that's fiction. I still look forward to a good ol stang story every week.
Well written, well edited, and better proof read. It was another unique spin that still has humor, Mustangs, and crazy women.
Thank you SS06 for a fun read.
And I am not a member of forgive the cheating wife at any cost club.
The writing and the plot was so immature and unrealistic.
All you fans going rah-rah over this story, would you still cheer for it, if stangstar wasn't a brand name here on lit?
Somebody who does not like humor that will not like this story.
I had my entire office laughing by reading some of the lines. This was classic Stang. For the rocket scientist down below who posted anonymously. You're probably the smartest guy in you trailer park but dude we all know how these stories end. Either they get back together or they don't. the skill is in making the story interesting enough to get to that point. Until Rehnquest comes back Stang your the best!
The story was tongue-in-cheek humor all the way, so hard to get to wrapped up in the (lack of) drama. I can think of many worse ways to spend a few minutes, and the chuckles I had were real.
The wife was classic SS06: shit-hole stupid, with the emotional maturity of a grapefruit. It's pretty much impossible not to feel bad for them, no matter the nature of their betrayals. It's like being mad as Gilligan, or Barney Fife, or Stimpy.
Two interesting things about this story: first the dicotomy between the hero's father's choice to stay with the mother (although he did seem like a pussy-whipped cuck until later in the story) and our hero's choice to hit the road; second, the idea of increasing payback on the wife as her resistance to hubby's efforts for a clean break increase. Last week's SS06 offering featured a much worse betrayal than the one here, but the wife 'played ball' (reluctantly, and with much pain) and so maybe paved the way for a second chance down the road. Here, her stubborness resulted in (earned or not) more and more hell.
The dialogue in bed between the cheaters set a new low in realistic dialogue, but at least it was well-edited. The story was easy to read and generally well-edited, though I did notice a couple of elementary mistakes.
If I was rating this as a dramatic LW story, I would give it a 1. But, the choice to treat the storyline as a comedic farce saved it.
The reference to JPB has tp be tongue in cheek most of his stories are of him staying with his wife who does anyone who's male except him.
This is really a matter of personal preference, but I dislike when stories reference Literotica or other online stories and writers. To me it feels like breaking the 4th wall just to make an inside joke.
Until the the epilogue. Why did he have to marry Pearl. He had choices in life again and this kind of ending has been a cliche recently. Only a 4 because of that.
Thanks! Pretty good read. Cheaters punished, beautiful new life, and humor to boot!
not exactly Harddaysknight, but close enough... ;)
You moved 400 miles away, changed identities, started a new career. Then you are somehow back home and Brian again as the story ended. No explanation. You usually tie up this sort of obvious loose end. Holidays will do that I guess. Your JPB reference was too kind to him. He disappointingly wimps out in his recent stories, removing the husband's gonads and sending him back to the little slut wife with his hat in his hand.
Ex- Wife is in prison and not a threat any longer and he is Divorced. Now he has a New Woman and the prospects of a Family.
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