All Comments on 'Zombies Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
hmph!!!!

This chapter is a bit of a let down!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
stop bitching. i am enjoying the pace.

Many authors try to rush things. Enjoy the set up-

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good start

I enjoyed it. Looking forward to seeing where it goes. I also read the prologue, and it was a very good start at setting up the world.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very interesting start!

This reads like a cross between Omega Man and The World, the Flesh and the Devil. One thing I hope you do in the future is double check your spelling (peeled of). This chapter was better than the first in that respect.

Looking forward to more chapters!

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