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The structure is probably too complex for an erotic story. Reminds one of Nabokov's Spring in Fialta for some reason.
Nice structure
Complex and interesting story. Nice touch with the tavernas having the same name, the guitarists, the music, the flashbacks, the rhythm of the fucking. Yes, well done.
I don't normally read the GM stories here but after this I'm tempted to try some more of yours. :)
Truffles
Your stories are like a box of chocolate truffles: melt-in-your-mouth rich and sensuous.
Excellent !
What an amazing story ! Extremelly well written, detailed to perfection, the sensuous emotions are described to exquisiteness ... and hot as hell !!
Picturing in my mind the rhythm of the music to the pounding of the fucking, made me get a major boner and cum hard !
I simply loved the story. Thanx for both pleasures !
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