All Comments on 'All My Fault'

It was nice that everything ended up well in the end, but I could not help to think that if my wife of roughly five years were to spring this on me, I would be very hurt. I would think that I did not really understand this woman at all - never mind that she changed her mind. She was planning to screw me over. She had changed her mind. Would she change it again?

Your daughter would have been proud of its dedication. My condolences to you and your family.

I would like to think they are Up there smiling down on us lost fools just waiting to be together again

just came across this one - what a wonderful loving story. really great. sorry for your loss, could feel your love for her in this story. 5!

Sorry about your loss. may the lord give you peace. My wife's mom lost and infant son many decades ago. until the day she died she could still feel the loss. our kids love for her helped her to lessen the pain.

Made the wife cry.

5 *****

Then take him for all she could and then do it all over again to some other poor sap.

Well, some folks might take um-bridge to that. For example, ME. I would smile thank her so kindly that she deigned to decide to stay with me and then I'd begin to plan my exit.

How can he live with the knowledge that the NEXT time he pisses her off she may decide to execute her plan.

It might take a few months (years), but I'd have a nest egg and a firm plan on how to destroy the scheming bitch.

This was a refreshing story which was short and sweet! Most definitely worthy of 5*****!

Sweet, creative, well-written, beautiful story. Circular and to the point. Loved the twisted LW element-a premise that could easily have been in a SS06 or JPB story, but handled with brevity and grace by this author. This reader is sorry for your Ioss, and thankful for the wonderful story it inspired. A touching tribute; I'm sure your daughter is smiling down from heaven as she reads this story.

I'm sorry for your loss. There is nothing in the world worse than losing a child. I feel your emotion in the story, which was a great love story, in spite of the wife's terrible mother. God Bless.

before it begins the slippery slope, TK U MLJ LV NV

That was unexpected, and welcome.

I loved it. A real loving wife story. Keep writing and keep posting. Im so tired of the married gay husband crap.

Thoughtful quick, but not slick, hitter on marriage as a disposable entity. Clear eyed and coldblooded women using matrimony as vehicle to cruise around inane enjoy for a period of time until it's time to trade up & out.

This author is not prolific , but his prior stories seem to resonate long after being read. This one seems to be no exception.

Great read, very well done. Touching.

Thank God one of them was able to fix herself.

And as for the dedication? A wonderful tribute.

Interesting plot, where she had to go against what she thought was "normal". Thank You.

It was all his fault...., that it was so beautiful, because I am afraid that I would never have forgiven a wife who confessed that she married me with plans to divorce me five years later. Which do you prefer a loving spouse or lots of money?

Beautifully written, paced to perfection and a tribute to the love that lasts a lifetime.

My sincere condolences for your loss. As others have said, I'm sure your daughter would be proud to have a story dedicated to her that is so filled with love.

Thank you for sharing this with us and I only wish it was possible to award it more than 5* because it's in a different class to anything else on here.

Touching, very touching.

so sweet. Thank you for this story.

Very beautiful! Thank you so much!

very insightful and touching. thank you.

It's about damn time someoene wrote about a real honest LOVING WIFE! I've almost stopped even looking in this section anymore. Hell, I almost stopped coming to LIt for entertainment because of the shoddy work posted recently. The is the absolute best flash story I've ever read. Keep up the superior work!

Myhands316.

Your stories are so refreshing. Do you think we could work out a deal of you submitting stories more often. LOL Thanks for sharing this great read!!!!

Just a wonderful story of how love and life should be

but if there is only one small pebble of truth in the story that actually reflects the love between Tracy's parents, then nothing could honor her more.

Loved it, short, sweet and to the point. Great job and please keep writing.

A great lot and a great story. One of the best I've read on this site. Sounds quite realistic. Keep up the good work.

Very well done, one of the best stories in the Loving Wives section for months. Sorry for your loss, parents should never have to deal with their own child's death...

I don't buy his "All the doubts and anger vanished in the second she took to utter those words." The problem is this was written in the 1st person. We all of his thoughts and feelings. You built up nothing but him dumping her, and you negated it, as you said, in a second. No. That's poor plotting and sloppy writing. Maybe if you had written it from her POV or in 3rd person I could have accepted it, but not as written.

Very sweet and touching.

Swee, surprising and very well-written.

his, faithful, loving, flawed wife who in the end didn't listen to her mother and had a great life. Damn you Vulcez, Damn youuuuuuuu

5+******************************************************

Great story.... Keep on writing!

My condoleances, Vulcez.

As for the story itself. Call me cynical, but if I were married to such a person, one who confesses to marrying me solely to take me to the cleaners in a preplanned divorce, I would not trust her so easily again. Because the entire past relationship changes in light of this new info. Ever heard of marrying under false pretenses?

The biggest of MANY questions would be: "Did you ever love me for the past 4-5 years?"

Or was that faked? How would you know? Would she tell the truth? How DID she see you for your entire relationship (not just during the marriage)? Mr. Mealticket?

Having planned this for nearly 5 years, and willing to execute this plan after all this time, only to stop it when someone ELSE points out the bad sides to it, that's EXTREMELY worrying. If she had NOT taken that trip to her sister, would she have just have done it without even to stop and think? Yes.

How much love did she have for him if she never even considered how much pain it would cause him?

I'm not dissing how it went in this story, but if it were even slightly more realistic, hubby would have had major trouble believing and trusting his wife again, no matter how much she says she now loves him. After all, he believed her before, while SHE was still thinking how to best bleed him dry...

On the other hand, the romantic side of me is yelling "Eat your black heart out, mercenary bitch mom, and die a lonely death!".

I'm just a sap for a happy ending, but I think I would have had a little more problem with her confession than he did.

She married him with her own agenda in mind...for 5 years their entire marriage was a lie...and even up to her visit she was still ready to carry out, "the plan."

Oh yeah, I would have had a much bigger problem.

I still liked the story in spite...

2nd that Huedogg . 5*

The message of this story for me is that people may be reading the same book, or enjoying the same meal, and gleaning a different message or loving a different aspect within the dish! Obviously couples are not on exactly on the same page because Sweetie likes a guy and Hubby likes a gal, BUT Sweetie may appreciate something different about Hubby than he might think is his 'best side.' And vice-versa. This tale starts out with one side of that phenomenon at the extreme (Sweetie married him thinking of him as her 'starter husband'). The middle of the story has Hubby reformatting his opinion to 'Who is this woman who was prepared to recycle me because of a plan?' His new view of Sweetie can never be erased, it will be lurking in every decision he makes for the rest of their married life (unless he is TOTALLY brain dead!)

The epilogue shows things worked out fine...that Sweetie really did get her head out of her butt just in time. I think the story would have been better without the epilogue, but then the dedication would not tie in. Condolence for your loss!

ex J203x1-1 TUSLOG3-2

...one of the best stories that I've read in a long, long time.

the wife commits a scxual assault on her husband to get him to listen to her?

Vulcez,

Rest in Love Tracy.

Thanks for sharing on Lit, Vulcez.

x

Thank you, thank you, thank you. This story brought tears to my eyes and knowing that you dedicated it to your daughter? Whoa. I'm a wreck and it's all your fault.

Me Too!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for a good loving story!

what an ending !!! Superb.

Very nice--5 stars.

Immensely poignant story that went beyond my expectations of sensuality. I'm sorry for the loss of your daughter, & commend you for the magnificent narrative.

Lovely story. good job!

A bunch of BS

truly, a very nice story even if this is a tragedy to you. Thank you for sharing.

I had not seen the last line you wrote. I am so sorry for your loss. Nothing on this earth is worse. My thoughts are with you and your loved ones. May Tracy rest in peace.

I liked it. It was well written and thought out. I'm sorry for your loss. I hope you have more stories like this in you.

Wonderful story. I always enjoy your writings. Please keep it up. Very sorry about your loss; this story seems to be a very adequate monument.

I gave it a five -- rare for me. I am a sucker for happy endings too.

You dedicated a porn story to your daughter's memory? Creepy, no?

this is not a porn story.Pornography is defined as "writings, pictures, films, etc, designed to stimulate sexual excitement." This story was clearly not designed to make the reader horny. It is a story about love set in the real world where married people do (gasp) have sex.

Being a sucker for a happy ending I loved it. Also you defined a loving wife, that actually was loving, even if she did blame him, let's face it us hubbies are always to blame. Could it happen in real life, absolutely. well worth a 5

I am sorry for your loss. You did her a great justice in writing this story of a loving wife. I have to say that I'm not sure I wouldn't have slept with one eye open for a while after that revelation though. 5 stars.

It was unreal and easily predicted, such awful in laws! Devil's spawn. And his wife never discussed her family with him? He never wondered and asked her why he wasn't invited to their homes? It was all too artificial, the emotions came across as contrived.

But the score is OK, so my taste is.. different

Eyeball, another piece of garbage "story". Where do these people dream this chit up??????(laffin). No wonder our society has so many phucked up people! Get out of the sewer, get a life and do something productive

First, I am so sorry for your loss. You and yours are in my prayers.

I liked this story, but wished his reaction would have been stronger. She lied to marry him, and only at the last moment did she essentially wake up. I don't have an issue with them remaining together, but I would have enjoyed it much more with more emotion on his part. Yes he was upset, but seemed almost nonchalant.

Regardless, great refreshing plot.

Thank you,

M1

....what fucking loser is going to let her continue to hold their prick as that tale unwinds, what children under 6 would even comprehend the shit mom was spewing and betray their "love" for their dad to say nothing about thinking that shit was normal until they were "older"-did the author mean age 7, when they would by law be forced to interact with normals? What loving daughter would give a shit about "alienating mom" after what she did to dad. Dumb.

@ Anon A Taj Mahal for the husband from the wife, not a huge architecture monument, but it is same value............Against the golddigger family tradition she was assisted getting some experience from her sisters with their earlier husbands.

BTW The first state in the USA, Pennsylvania Family Law ereased the wife/husband alimoney................ (I think a short time 1-2 years would be good only for a divorced houswife to find job).

I am sorry for your lost and I do not say more the lost beloved next to kin will live until

somebody remembers her with fondness. If Stacy from "How Are You?" was written after Tracy, I am the next human who remembers her a little until I live..........

... and in the end, that naivete served them well. She grew up with a misplaced view of "normal" compared to most of the rest of us. He didn't have a clue about "The Plan" even after 5 years of marriage. But both are naive in matters of the heart as well, in the sense that they didn't let their own stupidity rob them of a good thing. She realized the error of her wayward mother's ways and (somewhat naively) chose to tell him the effect he'd had on her. He believed in the genuineness of her change of heart. A cynical husband would have rejected the sincerity of her confession; a naively trusting husband accepted it at face value and gave her the opportunity to justify that trust in the long run. Both were better for it. I'm guessing that Tracy received that kind of unconditional acceptance from her dad during her too few days on this earth. Thanks, Vulce, for once again speaking straight to the heart. Best regards, Average Bear

That was good, thank you for this story, I can imagine my wife and I at the end of this story, we have only been together for 22 years happy years of marriage so quite a few years to go to reach 62 years of marriage. Thanks again. 5 stars all the way.

Lovely story line. It took me from shoot the bitch, to hold her forever. All in all a great read.

Sorry for your lose.

for all husbands and wives. "The Plan" has already been used by too many crazy people.

I enjoyed the read and the wisdom

Thanks

Thank you for the read. Top marks. And I am realy sorry about your sweet Tracy. A big hug from me, Sorry to be an anon but cant get in. Jiminab

put it in non-erotic next time please

Loved your story!!!! Sorry for all you lost.

This story made me cry. I can picture my wife and I at the end-both of us with eyes twinkling-saying I love you. Such a shame what you lost though. Sorry for your loss.

When ever I read your stories I am surprised that you never fail to keep up your high performance! Don´t you dare stop writing someday! Let us have more. 5 Stars, of course

I was really touched by this story as in a few words you built the characters with depth. I also am sorry for your loss of your precious child Tracy. May you all find a way to find at least some peace and perhaps she really is in a better place. You see; I've died twice and have recall of when I was officially dead. There is more. You cannot destroy energy; but transmute it's form. We are after all essentially energy riding in meat bags. Check out Kirillian photography.

I'm jealous you can create such a powerful, heart-rending story in so few words. Very well done. Thank you for this one.

stories on this site.

Thank you for this heartwarming story. I am jealous of your writing talent.

It made me sad and happy. I'm so sorry for the loss of your daughter. Nothing could be worse. thanks again.

Thank you for sharing this story.

I laughed and I cried. I've read a few of your stories now and your different takes on relationships is refreshing. I hope you keep writing for I truly look for your name at the end of the titles.

We all pick up things, beliefs and ideas from our parents and family, that are not very

healthy. Though few of those beliefs are as toxic as what Katey was subjected to.

If we're lucky we figure things out before they do too much damage.

Very sweet, and excellent, story.

I'm sorry for your loss.

it is life Been there and DOING it I see her in my mind i feel her in my body I know she is in my heart I will love her forever and ever and ever

sorry to read about your daughter

Thank you for that and I am so sorry about your loss.

Sorry about your loss.. I have loss alot of Family and Friends to Cancer.

Sorry for your loss. I know exactly how it feels. Lost my daughter 3 years ago. Damn it...crying all over again.

Lost my own daughter 3 years ago to a blood clot. My heartfelt condolences to you and yours. Damn it man...you made me cry all over again.

lost mother brothers, wife and

both of my children

68 year old orphan

sometimes life sucks

i will share my tears with and

for your loss

I am sorry for your loss i lost my brother in 2002 and my sister in 2010 to cancer it's sutch a horrible way to die god bless your daughter she is at peace now,

Sorry for your loss, I know how much it still hurts. As for the story? I liked the happy ending, but I wonder, if after listening to his wife's story, that he might have had second thoughts about sticking around? After all, she had years of indoctrination by her mother and sister and he just had to wonder if she might succumb at some point. At the very least, he might have started to secretly hide assets and prepare in other ways. And after awhile, that might eat away at him until he did, indeed, strike first and file for divorce. I like your ending better than mine.

This was one of the first stories I ever read on Literotica.com and, I have to say, it was amazing how you took an erotic story and made it so gentle! Thanks for the uplifting thoughts.

Death is but the next great adventure. Dont mourn the death of your loved ones, celebrate their lives.

I am not a writer by no means, but I do read alot. And this story by far griped all my attention. From the start I new this was one of only a few stories that are well written. My hats off to you and with all due respect to you for your loss of such a close family member. I must agree with anonymous dont grieve the dead, be happy the are no longer suffering or living in this world full of chaos, anger and hate, she is at peace. And again thankyou and keep writing.

The story made no sense. Sorry, I just didn't care for it.

@ BDEarth

What's not to understand. Wife's mother got butthurt, raised daughters to marry and divorce men for money, wife was not a cunt like the rest of her family so abandoned her mother's plan and stayed with the man she loved.

And lived happily ever after.

Thanks for the great story.

a former lighting fast chicken .....

sorry for your loss........

my your daughter be happy in the after world.........

A real loving wife! Sure, she was misguided at first, but she grew a brain and realized that she really loved her hubby. Great tale!

5 HUGE Stars!

I pray that I never have to bury my child, and my condolences go out to the Author.