Hot Blooded 02

Great Written

I love it

Maitre, its horny

You made a great job. Wunderful Story.

Freddy

You are great

MaitreNuit, you have hard worked this time, A lot of storys and all perfectly written.
Go on.
I like it much.

Herbstblume

Amazing

Horny. Will be there a part 3?

Awesome written

I like your style.
Keep on writing,

LW

You want more, rodeorider58? No problem!

The 3rd and last part should be out by tomorrow or latest sunday. Enjoy the read.

MaitreNuit

People who's native language isn't English
that read this are praising your work.

People that speak and read only in proper English
see this as a mess. Please for the love God get
an editor from the western hemisphere of the planet..

Screw the grammar-nazi

I've seen a lot messier shit from native speakers. You've done quite a good job. Keep on writing like this. I really like your stories.

Just lovely

So passionate and gentle. You let us really dive into your character's souls

excellent work

I've read thousands of stories and this one is good forget all those jerks who want perfect gramer the story is solid you're not writing a college entrance essay so screw the nay sayers