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All Comments on 'Safe Sex on the Beach, or MILF FTW'

by Natural_Blond

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

A fun story.

Rawmaster50Rawmaster50over 11 years ago
Good story

Not as much character development as I like, but the sex scenes weren't bad and the characters were at least true to the story. Keep writing, 4 stars

JonTaylorJonTaylorover 11 years ago
Five Stars

Good story, well written. On the character development comment, I related to Kevin pretty well and Mrs. Jablonski's sympathetic behavior toward him was developed enough. Keep on keepin on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Not very good

Boy meets girl. Girl says "Let's fuck." Fuck. Next Fuck. Blow job. Fuck.

Not erotic in the least.

Too bad. It had potential.

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