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Keeper Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/08/12

I was hoping you'd continue

and I almost missed the late posting.

Thanks and of course I look forward to the next chapter.

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by EvaYvonne09/08/12

I'm smiling

Moremoremoremore!

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by Anonymous09/08/12

More, please

I love this sweet story, can't wait for more.

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by devilishdaisy8609/08/12

more!!!

omg please continue this story soon! and I love how he calls her baby!

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by Mayness09/08/12

Good story!

Just read all chapters and enjoyed the story very much, very interesting plot wise. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you .

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by Anonymous09/09/12

So Good!

I love this new series and know I'm going to go crazy waiting for updates. Another amazing chapter. No criticism here. Can't wait for more!!

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by Anonymous09/09/12

love it

love your writing read your other story hate it when it was done so glad to read this one looking for more of this one soon please love how this is going

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by Ardella09/10/12

Thank you!

You all are a big part of what makes writing fun.
More to come, hang in there.... :)
~Ardella

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