All Comments on 'The Business Trip Ch. 02'

Though of course we know Miri IS right!

you give us the Aruba trip!

"Never introduce an Aruba trip in Act One unless you're going to use it in Act Three"

writer who introduce aruba trip in act one and not bring it act two is a cock tease!

Clearly other stuff had to happen first, wouldn't you (and Confucius) agree?

I'm wading at the beach in Aruba but I don't see my expected friends. How much longer will I be wading and waiting alone?

Their reservations aren't until the spring: the winter season in Aruba is WAY too expensive.

Besides, they still have to decide who's rooming with whom during the trip.

Frankly, I was much more interested in rod sliding in and out of her steaming pussy!

This needs to continue, this is getting very interesting.

Can't wait to see how this continues!

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Lots of fun. Keep writing!!!

Novel plot, but fails to develop what was going between "Mark and Becky" for one month back at home.

Also, what happened after return from The Business Trip.