Get with it he said.
Loser all the way.
I give you credit for the story line but you really need to use an editor. This was a very difficult read and I only made it through the first few paragraphs.
I made it to "just once seen her boobs" and had to stop.
an editor wood reel-e hlep mayk yer store-e more gooder & stuff - thimk abowdit serially
Loved the build up to the climax
The grammar sucks.
Awful - as per other comments, but THIS IS NOT INCEST!
Son-in-law and Mother-in-law is certainly not Incest. Suggest that daughter and mother is lesbian incest. Build up part 2 as ménage-de-trois and let MIL teach.
Good Story. Good Sex loved the build up to sex between Son IL and Mo IL
Hope I had a sexy MIL like yours. She is in her early 40's and someday I will have to push my ball into her court
Sexy young MIL is always fuckable suckable kissable lickable. Loved the fuck. Alas my MIL is 60 plus but trust me she has all the ables.
It looks like you seduced your MIL and not the opposite. Loved it. Continue
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