Awesome. The details were described perfectly and they MADE the story. So hot...I think I need a Cool Shower myself.
cool i once tried fukin with my cuz in the shower and it was awesome!!!
but it hurt like hell
Rather peculiar, but nicely done.
I don't care to read about lesbians. Tag "lesbian sex" not "first time"
very sexy, like to be on vacation with you. what a turn on. thanks for the 'gaz!
Just loved your story, write more please.
If that's the first story you've published you're a natural. I loved it.
Another story, please.
Extremely erotic and very well written. Even your usage of swearing was well done, the description of how these two smoking hot women pleasured each other was very well done. Keep it up.
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