If that's the first story you've published you're a natural. I loved it.
Another story, please.
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Anonymous11/16/13
Very Hot
Extremely erotic and very well written. Even your usage of swearing was well done, the description of how these two smoking hot women pleasured each other was very well done. Keep it up.
English
Awesome. The details were described perfectly and they MADE the story. So hot...I think I need a Cool Shower myself.
sexy
cool i once tried fukin with my cuz in the shower and it was awesome!!!
but it hurt like hell
Rather peculiar, but nicely done.
Tag Lesbian Sex
I don't care to read about lesbians. Tag "lesbian sex" not "first time"
very nice
very sexy, like to be on vacation with you. what a turn on. thanks for the 'gaz!
Nice 1st Time Lesbian Sex
Post more!
Had my first les experience at 14 under similar circumstance
Just loved your story, write more please.
Hot, Hot, Hot
If that's the first story you've published you're a natural. I loved it.
Another story, please.
Very Hot
Extremely erotic and very well written. Even your usage of swearing was well done, the description of how these two smoking hot women pleasured each other was very well done. Keep it up.
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