All Comments on 'Ride to Ecstasy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

could have went on to tell about the other couple

rcrmonte3rcrmonte3over 11 years ago
Needs A 2nd Chapter

Needs closure. What happens between Randy and Linda? What happens between Randy & Lena?

Does Ray approve of Linda doing it with somebody else? Sounds like Randy doesn't. Sounds like Linda tacitly approves of Ray's cheating.

Sidney43Sidney43over 11 years ago

Sorry, this is a pathetic story that can't seem to make up it's mind what the plot is. Randy is an asshole and hubby is a moron for even calling him and inviting him to their home. He says he isn't into swinging anymore and tells Lena he doesn't want her fooling around and then just lets Randy fuck his wife without doing anything about it. Should have taken a rifle and blew Randy's balls off and left him for the bears to snack on.

I gave it a three and that was charitable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Weak cunt

Fuck them all off including your slut wife,but fuck his wjfe first

JerrycuriousJerrycuriousover 11 years ago
Good Read

Can't wait for next chapter .

ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosover 11 years ago
Unpleasant and non-erotic.

Should have posted it elsewhere.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
It was stupid.

This story lacked only three things

1)Plot

2)Good writing

3)Any intelligence whatsoever

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