by TxRad
This was really different and I enjoyed it. I'll try and watch for your name to see what you do next!
I hope there will be more. I loved how you started this delightful piece. A hint. A tease. So please oh please have more.
I really hope there will be more. It's such a great lead in.
I loved the story,but I need more!!!! Good lead in should be more!
A good begining of what seems to be a great story.
Please - make him come back really soon!