All Comments on 'Virgo Ch. 01'

I would like to hear more about her background. One detail..this sounds like it takes place long ago, did they have chinos back then?

She is strong and mysterious, and i doubt that man will break her.

More please!

♪I come from Chino, so all your threats are empty♫

Really enjoying the start of what i hope will be an interesting set of stories!

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!

Loved it! Please give us more!!

You are a very talented writer, I was completely hooked within a few lines. I only ask that you consider giving this story a happy ending.

Happy writing

Sweet_kitten

I am so glad ya'll are enjoying my little story. I am working on the next chapter right now and should be finished and have it submitted by tomorrow, so it will be posted soon I promise.

And GingerVye: No, I suppose they wouldn't have chinos in this time. It's possible i was hoping no one would really care, because I really do enjoy using the word so much. However, it was dishonest to the story and I apologize. Won't happen again! From now on, Leofrick will wear trousers or nothing..Probably nothing, more often than not. Shame on him.

Thank you guys so much for reading and commenting, I really enjoy hearing your thoughts! The next chapter is quite a bit of fun, and I have big plans for this story, including background information on Virgo. I hope ya'll like it :)

Keep going!

Thank you for writing,it is very refreshing! A threesome would be great!

why have you stopped?? :(

Awww, c'mon... Why did you stop? :(

Why did you stop? Loved the story but horrid when there is nothing more to read...

Someone should take over this story since the author abandoned it.

wish someone would at least to finish this! It had such a great start

Please continue this story!! This cliffhanger you left is resl :(,