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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/23/12

Kudos!

Thoroughly enjoyed the mystery and suspense. The final twist was great! Hope to read the sequel!

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by Anonymous09/24/12

This 'you this you that' business

so impersonal and makes it all so lukewarm!

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by SissyPantySlut09/27/12

luke warm

I try to use the second person mode to allow readers to more easily imagine themselves in the situation. It's a particular technique and not for everyone.

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by Anonymous04/24/14

Total fucking rubbish by A Wanker

Don't bother writing any more

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by Anonymous04/05/15

Nope

It appears you copied sentences from other writings and pasted them together to create this story. I gave it a 1, but in my opinion didn't deserve even that score.

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by sexymeup12/14/16

got my interest

Ok I am guessing a sister or mom who has a key to his apartment or a girlfriend , someone he knows for sure.lol. I don't think some strange woman is going to break in just to give him a blowjob, lol.

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