All Comments on 'speak, of heart'

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE HEARTS BEAT

pounding out a message, TK U MLJ LV NV

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 11 years ago

i like the word play here

with punctuation where one wouldnt expect it

i think the line breaks

well chosen

served as punctuation too

am i being too presumptive here

suggesting the d before your jungle

the phonetic equivalent of

the fun you may have had

with punctuation

or should I say

absence thereof

in as much as j

at the beginning of a sentence

in English has a d sound to it

i may be wrong

but i hope not

because i otherwise wasted a 5

live4passionlive4passionover 11 years agoAuthor
Very much so

No, not wasted greenmountaineer. Delightfully perceptive, and Very much so appreciated.

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