Actions Speak Louder Than Words

Very Good

I'm quite pleased. Can't wait to see more!

cant wait for more

I really liked this.....

If I were to star...

In a female version of 'The Hangover' this is how I'd want it written. Well done First Timer! Can't wait for what's to come :-)

*****

Nice first effort.

Five.

Great start!

Congratulations on your first submission.

awesome*****

im going to like you

*****

Great start...............

A "5" for sure

You do what a good writer should do: First, you get us reading, then, you keep us reading, and, finally, you have us wanting more.....soon!

Omly a Woman!

Speaking from the male perspective, only a wman can describe this experience.
You are wonderful! Keep it up!

Excellent!

Please continue this story, it's an excellent start, can't wait to read what happens!

Love it !!!

One chapter in and I'm already loving it .Can't wait to read more : )

Nice start

A little brief for my taste, yet.. complete. You put the foundations down for a great story. Adding to my favorites to check back for more.

wow

Great start for your 1st story!

Not white but Greek

I've never been to Africia and I'm not from there but we are considered African American because of the origins of out ancestors. So I do find that a valid statement. If you think about it "white" is a lump some description. Mediterranean is more accurate because it's the origin of that person's ancestors. Ask someone that's Italian about their ethnicity they are going to respond, I'm Italian not I'm white.

Looks good so far

I can totally understand what he said about not being white cause most from the Mediterranean isn't white. I think most forget about the world history here cause he isn't white. The ancient Greek and Roman world people were more mixed than people today, and until a few hundred years ago ,that was how it was and that was normal. And yes they were mixed with Palestinians, Persians, Arabians, Africans, and Asians. Most from Spain,Italy, and Greek with the islands and countries that surround that area aren't white, just test there blood for there family history and you will be surprise at how mix they are. Try telling someone from that region that they are white and they will give you a dirty look and smack you behind you head cause obviously you didn't go to school. Just cause someone looks white doesn't make it so cause a lot of black people that are really pale look white, but they aren't, so you shouldn't make judgements like that. ( this note from above is for the other commentator that made the ridiculous and stupid comment about Alex being Greek and obviously he is white, when he's not)
I'm a African Canadian not Mediterranean

I like this one so far, can't wait for more background info on the both of them.

More please

Love it

Loved this story so far......

Keep On

you are doing great!!!

I love it so far, hope for more story soon

Love it!!!

I love it I hope you're gonna continue this story because it definitely grabbed my attention please update!!!

Love it!!!!

I really hope you gonna continue this story!

OOH NOOO >.< DONT STOP THERE

WHATS BETTER THAN INTERRACIAL ! VIRGIN INTERRACIAL >.< ok i gotta read it again

I like it!

I like this story alot! I would like to see a continuation of this story =)

I like it!!

Please continue....

Chapter 2

Hi all I'm working on chapter 2 as we speak it may not have a sex scene because it's going to be backgrounds about the characters. Although I won't pass up an opportunity at add at least one scene in the grand scheme of things. Thanks for all the feedback I'm hooked and EditorKarl you're the best!

Great job!

I am really enjoying your story so far and look forward to the next chapter.

I'm so glad you're working on the next chapter. This was good and I will be checking back. -DC

>.< i cant stop reading this...

fekeejngknvkgn i know its only been 4 days but im suffering here :((((

I'm feeling this

I am definitely waiting for the next chapter(s)...

So far

So good!!!!

OMG!!!!! Please update soon!

Chanting, "UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!"

You are teasing me

Where is the update???? WHERE? Where? WHERE? I want to know what happens!

Update

I have submitted the update to my wonderful editor just now (it's 1 am here so unless he's up for no reason like me it wont be worked on tonight) I'm sorry to keep you all waiting it's been a combo of extra busy life and some other things that I talk about at the beginning of the story, coupled with the fact that my spouses schedule is the opposite of mine right now and he is being moody and trying to withhold the penis is not helping me at all. I know some things should stay in the box but if can't talk about my lack of sex here then where can I share. The feedback is appreciated and I can't wait to post chapter 2, 3 is already in the works I plan to minimize the gaps in chapters in the future. Even if it means tying my husband to the bed and taking it (which i should do anyway lol) ~Allisonfancy

Hi all you can also check out my blog for more info, playlist, character list and descriptions as well as teasers of upcoming chapters! Thanks and much love

Next chapter please

Finally

A story where the girl isn't a whore or jezebel.

love

I'm in love

I can't wait to read the next chapter :D

Sexy, olive skinned, black hair and green eyes!

I call that a walking orgasim! Can not wait to read at least 20 chapters of this story!
WOW!