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NO story that includes
the reader as a supposed character is worth bothering to read!!
Very erotic
Don't listen to the other comment about the story not being worth reading. It was very well written and got me hard.
Ridiculous statement
To categorically state that no story written in the first person is worth reading is nonsense.
This story is well worth reading..
WELL worth reading
Any good perv will agree that that is a BONE raising story.
That was an awesome story, I'm so hard right now having just read that. I love pee!!!
pee-licious!
it's great to ser a fellow pee story writer publishing to Lit. and what a great story it was. well written. honest. hot.
and i have to agree with you that the combination of piss and pussy juice is unbelievably delicious.
More pee coming
Thanks for all the feedback!
I'm working on another pee story with these same characters. It is written in third person. It's about the sub working to get comfortable with her own pee in order to surprise her girlfriend.
Wet and wild :)
It looks like there will be more water sports in both of their futures. Just hope we get to read about it soon. Thanks
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