A Big Shiny Blue Marble Ch. 24

Keep them coming! Very entertaning story line. Thanks for taking the time to put your thoughts into words for us!

The pieces and parts ....

... are beginning to come together.

Ny'Zeille...

had it coming. At the beginning she was likable, but damn that bitch is bigoted. She deserved that and more!

"the rest of you are demoted as close to the rank of janitor as I can manage"

Damn. Karma is sweet, and payback's a BITCH. (Specifically, in this case, one named Shaevre. ;P )

note: my previous comment was posted as soon as I reached the end of page 1

...this is getting better & better. All we need now is to find the few remaining links which tie the rest of the characters together, and this story is gonna be da' BOMB.

nice...

I was really into Dahl & Selena due to the build-up of their chemistry. Your story is really great.. Well i am still holding on to Selena ending up w/ Dahl. They would ready be a family and a kid in Nahleen.

Ny'Zeille

She acted like people were game pieces that she could move as she willed. She completely forgot about a little thing called 'free will.'

beautiful

beautiful

Keep it up

This story gets better with every chapter

Seriously....

I hate Dahl and Selena's reunion. I can't help feeling he betrayed Selena; and Selena could care less that he mated someone else?! I was really hoping they would end up together, they were my two favorite characters

Seriously ~sigh~

Dahlgren mated with someone else - who is now deceased. He's grieving, but she can see that there is a way for them to move ahead, and her sister needs her. She needs something stable as well. She's still Selena, but she's a lot more as well. Sometimes the best way to take care or yourself is to take care of the ones you care about. Selena wants to have Nahl'een in her life and not as a kid that she sees once in a while. Sorry if I didn't make the story tell it better.

The way everyone just drops ny zeille is abit shocking, can there at least be attempts by her son to get arrax to reason with her ? As readers we know what happened but dahl would still be thinking that arrax and his mum are together

Ah well

Should just accept it. I hope Selena finds a better male than dahl was. That was too big of a disappointment. Especially since its said when she fully transforms into a demon she will be like their queen. And so far during this story the only time that the demi-human characters have done that is with a lover they care about. Look at Yasmin and Faith. Now im just waiting for Selena's turn to get her mate for good pls