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Indian Summer

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/12/12

at last the moment of pure joy a very hard cumming Mmmmmm love it

great story INDIAN SUMMER. just as i was getting hard feeling horny ,
you had your cum. like you i to have a very vived imagination.
with seeing you their in the car exploding with a big cummy load, loved it. as well as this story more please .

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by avidreader944509/12/12

Short but nice

The story could have been a little longer but, I think, not every story has to end with the reader "finishing". Your story shows skill at description without being overly detailed and good dialog. Keep writing.

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by Anonymous09/12/12

Nicely Done!

She already kmows I enjoyed the story. :) Good job and keep em' coming!

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