All Comments on 'Indian Summer'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
at last the moment of pure joy a very hard cumming Mmmmmm love it

great story INDIAN SUMMER. just as i was getting hard feeling horny ,

you had your cum. like you i to have a very vived imagination.

with seeing you their in the car exploding with a big cummy load, loved it. as well as this story more please .

avidreader9445avidreader9445over 11 years ago
Short but nice

The story could have been a little longer but, I think, not every story has to end with the reader "finishing". Your story shows skill at description without being overly detailed and good dialog. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nicely Done!

She already kmows I enjoyed the story. :) Good job and keep em' coming!

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