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Lucifer Rising

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/12/12

Good story idea but badly written

I enjoyed the plot immensely. The idea was solid.

The story was not very well developed and lacked detail and overall cohesiveness.

I think you should have expanded and put in a whole lot more details.

Hopefully you take this as it's intended, as constructive criticism.

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by Edwarus09/12/12

Liked it

Like the previous comment you could have wrote this as a whole story series and it would be really cool if you did and then make a sequel to this hopefully but please dont let it be a stand alone one chapter story its to good for just that

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by Anonymous09/13/12

all most

well you started out good but you lost it , sorry no gold ring .better luck next time

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