All Comments on 'Masquerade Madness 02'

Ok, now it's getting better, i'm looking forward to wha happens next. I get the feeling the gangster is her father.

She got a sexy costume, a wig, a manicure AND a pedicure, a Brazilian wax, and a cab ride to the party. With just $50. A good story, like a good movie, has to get the audience to suspend reality for a little while. I love the whole idea behind this story. It has real promise. But reality just has not been suspended very well with this critical part of it. I know, there's no way her father would have felt the need to give her more for just one night of staying at home. But, she should have had a savings or something to help fund her adventures.

Please keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!