if you continue with thus wonderfully written story, try to work into some real painful violence, and real humiliation, but just between the two characters. Others need not apply.
Thanks for doing this.
But it doesn't hurt to comment it too; this one's great! Possibly my favorite of your works, until the next one, of course. ;)
Your writing has a thoughtful and emotive quality that's very rare, especially when it's coupled with... well, smut. You make me ridiculously jealous with every story you write!
Beautiful. I love stories that explore these ambiguities of attraction.
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Anonymous03/10/15
thank you
I want to read everything you write. Please don't stop writing these stories, they are so different than the cheesy airbrushed versions I expected to find on a site like this! (no offense intended).
You're wrong about one thing though, they do exist.
-Blue Hornbill
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Anonymous11/13/15
Amazing
This is without a doubt the best story I have ever read on Literotica and I there on some very fine writers on here. Just beautiful.
English
wonderful writing
if you continue with thus wonderfully written story, try to work into some real painful violence, and real humiliation, but just between the two characters. Others need not apply.
Thanks for doing this.
Loved it intelligent and insight inspiring writng. Very sensuous and quite sexy
Great Story
You already know how much I love this...
But it doesn't hurt to comment it too; this one's great! Possibly my favorite of your works, until the next one, of course. ;)
Your writing has a thoughtful and emotive quality that's very rare, especially when it's coupled with... well, smut. You make me ridiculously jealous with every story you write!
Beautiful. I love stories that explore these ambiguities of attraction.
thank you
I want to read everything you write. Please don't stop writing these stories, they are so different than the cheesy airbrushed versions I expected to find on a site like this! (no offense intended).
You're wrong about one thing though, they do exist.
-Blue Hornbill
Amazing
This is without a doubt the best story I have ever read on Literotica and I there on some very fine writers on here. Just beautiful.
Gorgeous
What a beautiful story. You have a lovely mind.
Beautiful story, gorgeous writing. Thank you.
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